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It Was One of Those Mornings

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It was three o'clock in the morning and my body craved more sleep I'd been out all night with friends and just fallen into slumber deep when the defective smoke detector started going off - BEEP! BEEP! I couldn't get the batteries out, and fell off the ladder into a heap Called the maintenance man, didn't answer his phone...the creep! A tranquil Saturday morning to spend with my husband and pup Smelled the delicious aroma of coffee, my love brought me a cup "There's waffles and bacon with hot maple syrup coming right up. He came back moments later, on the tray was a single buttercup. "Happy Anniversary, Honey. Tonight I'm taking you out for sup." cccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccc 3-1-16 Mornings Contest for Sara

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Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 3/29/2025 4:04:00 PM

When I read someone, the first thing I do is look for a Monorhyme they have written. This is exquisite. Thank you for taking the time to comment on my poem ;) Warmly A.S.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/29/2025 5:59:00 PM

Your gracious review is very much appreciated from one Scorpio to another. ;-)

Balveen Cheema

Date: 3/26/2016 10:59:00 AM

Congrats Lin! Very lovingly written!

Lin Lane
Date: 3/29/2025 5:57:00 PM

Thank you.

Curtis Johnson

Date: 3/24/2016 1:37:00 PM

Congrats on your top win. Good read

Lin Lane
Date: 3/24/2016 2:00:00 PM

Thank you lots. Curtis.

Winged Warrior

Date: 3/24/2016 9:49:00 AM

Congrats my dear Lady Lin...well deserved...god bless...^WW^

Lin Lane
Date: 3/24/2016 12:32:00 PM

Thank you my dear Warrior. I appreciate your compliments.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 3/24/2016 8:35:00 AM

Greetings Lin. Congrats for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Lin Lane
Date: 3/24/2016 12:31:00 PM

and glad tidings to you, Teddy. Thanks for reading and liking this one.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 3/24/2016 7:45:00 AM

Hi Lin: Congratulations on a top win!

Lin Lane
Date: 3/24/2016 12:31:00 PM

Thank you very much, Ralph.

Carlene Simpson

Date: 3/23/2016 8:50:00 PM

Congrats on your 1st place win Lin..

Lin Lane
Date: 3/23/2016 10:15:00 PM

Thanks very much, Carlene.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/23/2016 8:05:00 PM

Hi Lin, Congratulations on your win in the the contest. Well crafted Lin, the good and the bad, deserving of your top placement. This one is going in my faves....Vlad. I enjoyed this one Lin.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/23/2016 10:14:00 PM

Thanks so much for liking it that well, vlad. ;)

Tom Quigley

Date: 3/23/2016 6:09:00 PM

Very nice!

Lin Lane
Date: 3/23/2016 6:58:00 PM

Thank you, Tom.

Susan Gentry

Date: 3/23/2016 2:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in this contest. Funny and well written. Definitely a #1!

Lin Lane
Date: 3/23/2016 6:58:00 PM

Hi Susan, and thank you.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/23/2016 2:46:00 PM

Two well balanced contrasting mornings, Lin. Breakfast in bed sounds divine! Congratulations on placing first!! // paul

Lin Lane
Date: 3/23/2016 6:58:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paul.

Meenakshi Raina

Date: 3/23/2016 2:38:00 PM

Congrats Lin, on your win !

Lin Lane
Date: 3/23/2016 6:57:00 PM

Thank you very much, Meenakshi.

Jean Murray

Date: 3/22/2016 11:11:00 PM

Beautiful win with a beautiful poem Lin.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/23/2016 1:48:00 AM

Thanks, Jean. I appreciate it.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/22/2016 9:12:00 PM

This is so sweet, the last poem I mean. Big congrats on your number one placement Lin!

Lin Lane
Date: 3/23/2016 1:48:00 AM

Thank you very much, Connie.

Sarita Milliner

Date: 3/22/2016 5:29:00 PM

Hello Lin, I loved your poem!

Lin Lane
Date: 3/22/2016 6:02:00 PM

Hiya, Sarita, and thank you so very much.

Brian Mcclain

Date: 3/22/2016 5:01:00 PM

Hi Lin, Congratulations on your First Place Win with this fun, creative poem! Cheers, Brian

Lin Lane
Date: 3/22/2016 5:03:00 PM

Hi Brian. Thanks so much. Glad you liked it.

Lu Loo

Date: 3/22/2016 1:34:00 PM

Lin, congrats on your top placement!!-luloo

Lin Lane
Date: 3/22/2016 5:03:00 PM

Thank you lots, Luloo.

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/22/2016 1:01:00 PM

Congratulations Lin, well deserved...

Lin Lane
Date: 3/22/2016 1:26:00 PM

Merci Charlie. I appreciate your congratulations.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/22/2016 11:43:00 AM

Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara..I really liked the flow and rhyme in this one..

Lin Lane
Date: 3/22/2016 11:47:00 AM

Thank you so very much for liking it, Sara. Also, thanks for hosting a fun contest.