Lin Lane Poet Monorhyme

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It Was One of Those Mornings

It was three o'clock in the morning and my body craved more sleep
I'd been out all night with friends and just fallen into slumber deep
when the defective smoke detector started going off - BEEP! BEEP!
I couldn't get the batteries out, and fell off the ladder into a heap
Called the maintenance man, didn't answer his phone...the creep!

A tranquil Saturday morning to spend with my husband and pup
Smelled the delicious aroma of coffee,  my love brought me a cup
"There's waffles and bacon with hot maple syrup coming right up.
He came back moments later, on the tray was a single buttercup.
"Happy Anniversary, Honey.  Tonight I'm taking you out for sup."


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3-1-16      Mornings Contest for Sara

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Anonomus Scorpio March 29, 2025 at 4:04 PM When I read someone, the first thing I do is look for a Monorhyme they have written. This is exquisite. Thank you for taking the time to comment on my poem ;) Warmly A.S. Lin Lane March 29, 2025 at 5:59 PM Your gracious review is very much appreciated from one Scorpio to another. ;-)

Balveen Cheema March 26, 2016 at 10:59 AM Congrats Lin! Very lovingly written! Lin Lane March 29, 2025 at 5:57 PM Thank you.

Curtis Johnson March 24, 2016 at 1:37 PM Congrats on your top win. Good read Lin Lane March 24, 2016 at 2:00 PM Thank you lots. Curtis.

Winged Warrior March 24, 2016 at 9:49 AM Congrats my dear Lady Lin...well deserved...god bless...^WW^ Lin Lane March 24, 2016 at 12:32 PM Thank you my dear Warrior. I appreciate your compliments.

Teddy Kimathi March 24, 2016 at 8:35 AM Greetings Lin. Congrats for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!!! ;-) Lin Lane March 24, 2016 at 12:31 PM and glad tidings to you, Teddy. Thanks for reading and liking this one.

Ralph Sergi March 24, 2016 at 7:45 AM Hi Lin: Congratulations on a top win! Lin Lane March 24, 2016 at 12:31 PM Thank you very much, Ralph.

Carlene Simpson March 23, 2016 at 8:50 PM Congrats on your 1st place win Lin.. Lin Lane March 23, 2016 at 10:15 PM Thanks very much, Carlene.

Vladislav Raven March 23, 2016 at 8:05 PM Hi Lin, Congratulations on your win in the the contest. Well crafted Lin, the good and the bad, deserving of your top placement. This one is going in my faves....Vlad. I enjoyed this one Lin. Lin Lane March 23, 2016 at 10:14 PM Thanks so much for liking it that well, vlad. ;)

Tom Quigley March 23, 2016 at 6:09 PM Very nice! Lin Lane March 23, 2016 at 6:58 PM Thank you, Tom.

Susan Gentry March 23, 2016 at 2:49 PM Congratulations on your win in this contest. Funny and well written. Definitely a #1! Lin Lane March 23, 2016 at 6:58 PM Hi Susan, and thank you.

Paul Callus March 23, 2016 at 2:46 PM Two well balanced contrasting mornings, Lin. Breakfast in bed sounds divine! Congratulations on placing first!! // paul Lin Lane March 23, 2016 at 6:58 PM Thank you so much, Paul.

Meenakshi Raina March 23, 2016 at 2:38 PM Congrats Lin, on your win ! Lin Lane March 23, 2016 at 6:57 PM Thank you very much, Meenakshi.

Jean Murray March 22, 2016 at 11:11 PM Beautiful win with a beautiful poem Lin. Lin Lane March 23, 2016 at 1:48 AM Thanks, Jean. I appreciate it.

Connie Marcum Wong March 22, 2016 at 9:12 PM This is so sweet, the last poem I mean. Big congrats on your number one placement Lin! Lin Lane March 23, 2016 at 1:48 AM Thank you very much, Connie.

Sarita Milliner March 22, 2016 at 5:29 PM Hello Lin, I loved your poem! Lin Lane March 22, 2016 at 6:02 PM Hiya, Sarita, and thank you so very much.

Brian Mcclain March 22, 2016 at 5:01 PM Hi Lin, Congratulations on your First Place Win with this fun, creative poem! Cheers, Brian Lin Lane March 22, 2016 at 5:03 PM Hi Brian. Thanks so much. Glad you liked it.

Beautiful Scars March 22, 2016 at 1:34 PM Lin, congrats on your top placement!!-luloo Lin Lane March 22, 2016 at 5:03 PM Thank you lots, Luloo.

Charlie Smith March 22, 2016 at 1:01 PM Congratulations Lin, well deserved... Lin Lane March 22, 2016 at 1:26 PM Merci Charlie. I appreciate your congratulations.

Sara Kendrick March 22, 2016 at 11:43 AM Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara..I really liked the flow and rhyme in this one.. Lin Lane March 22, 2016 at 11:47 AM Thank you so very much for liking it, Sara. Also, thanks for hosting a fun contest.

Joseph May March 22, 2016 at 11:42 AM Congrats on your win Lin Lin Lane March 22, 2016 at 11:46 AM Thank you a whole lot, Joseph.

Eve Roper March 22, 2016 at 11:38 AM Love your poem , congratulations on your 1st place win :-) Hugs Eve Lin Lane March 22, 2016 at 11:46 AM Thanks so very much, Eve....hugging you back.

Joanna Daniel March 22, 2016 at 8:52 AM Congratulations on your 1st place win :) nice contrast Lin Lane March 22, 2016 at 11:45 AM Thanks so much, Jo. I appreciate your comment.

Sandra Haight March 22, 2016 at 8:40 AM Hi Lin, congratulations on your top of the podium placement for your lovely poem. Nice contrast of mornings. Hugs, Sandra Lin Lane March 22, 2016 at 11:45 AM Thank you very much, Sandra. Hugs back to you.

DM Babbit March 1, 2016 at 9:50 AM So well done. Now, is there another night out on the town? Lin Lane March 1, 2016 at 9:56 AM There's always another night out to look forward to. Thanks, DMB.

Daniel Turner March 1, 2016 at 9:34 AM Love the poem, Peaches. It makes me happy to hear my friends are happy. Peace dear lady:) Lin Lane March 1, 2016 at 9:56 AM Thanks, Danny. From catastrophe to romance ~ a proper ending.

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