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It Was One of Those Mornings

It Was One Of Those Mornings


thought it was a good
morning that always went well
I got up to a 
very cranky hubby that
decided not talk or eat

fabulous morning 
everything I did was right
last cancer treatment
a very happy hubby
excited to talk and eat

2/29/2016

My hubby just finished his last of his 45 radiation treatments last Monday and doing well.


Poetry Contest:  It Was One Of Those Mornings - 
 Sponsored by: Sara Kendrick
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Dutta Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 10:47 AM
Congrats Eve to win. Love. Anisha
Kendrick Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 5:57 AM
Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara
Roper Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 9:54 AM
Thank you, Sara, for the congratulations and the great placement! Hugs Eve
Raven Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 10:44 AM
Hi Eve, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I am glad to hear the treatment is over and things are going well. Two wonderful Tankas, each in there own way. They do deserve and seven and into my faves this work goes. Joy and peace to you all....Vlad.
Roper Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 9:56 AM
Thank you, Mike , your are so kind and a great friend! Hugs Eve
Gentry Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 5:02 PM
Congratulations on your placement in this contest. Glad he's doing well... prayers for you both. Hugs
Roper Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 9:57 AM
Thank you, Susan! He is doing better we still need to know if it has worked!
Callus Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 3:15 PM
Congratulations on this winning entry which ends on such a positive note, Eve! I am pleased that your husband is doing well after his ordeal. Still keeping him in my prayers. hugs // paul
Roper Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 9:58 AM
Paul, thank you so very much for your prayers . I'm still praying.
Scars Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 3:48 PM
Eve, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Lane Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 12:45 PM
Well done, Eve. Hugs to you.
Simpson Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 8:46 PM
Great share Eve........Good luck in the contest
Canerdy Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 8:27 PM
Good job--the poem itself and its message, Eve! Janice
Roper Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 9:59 AM
Thank you so very much, Janice!
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 3:54 PM
oh, and the note you put here on the bottom is so nice. to think he is in remission, it sounds like. I bet he is thrilled. Yes, you chose a good topic for this one.
Roper Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 4:23 PM
Thank you Andrea, those couple of weeks was not a good ones with the after effects of the treatment. He is full of spirit now :)
La France Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 9:43 PM
Sara, first let me say how happy I am for your husband and for you that he is beating cancer, that takes strength and courage and your poem is very meaningful and beautiful with emotion, I am loving this 7 ~
Roper Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 9:52 PM
Thank you, Constance, for your caring for my hubby he has gone through a lot here the past few years. Your visit means a lot. Hugs dear friend
Sathasivam Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 6:08 AM
Excellent tanka. Happiness for both. Thanks for sharing it.
Roper Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 2:08 PM
Ravi, thank you so very much for the complement and well wishes for my husband. Hugs Eve
Lane Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 3:48 AM
Good tanka, Eve, and even better is the health news...((Eve))
Roper Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 2:10 PM
Thank you so very much, Lin, for the complement and well wishes for my husband. Hugs Eve
Onclaud Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 2:26 AM
ohh, a most delightful tanka.. what good news, eve.. huggs!
Roper Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 2:11 PM
Nette, thank you so very much for you visit and reading my poem. Hugs Eve
Johnson Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 1:23 AM
So happy for you and your husband. My soup mail is not working very well. The sample in forms has no rhyme at all, so I thought it wasn't necessary. Trying to fix Joyce
Roper Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 2:15 PM
Joyce., thank you so very much for well wishes for my husband. Don't worry about your poem I did notice that the sample didn't rhyme, so just ignore rhyming it is hard for me to rhyme, but it states quatrains so I was just following the instructions. Hugs Eve
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