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It Was Not My Fault

It is windy out there Peter’s mother warned him. He did not believe, and ran after his brother Jim. Jim took off, and with a gust, Peter was in the air. The wind was ruthless, taking him without a care. He flew over stones, rocks, gravel, and the school. He was blown to a mountain top where the air was cool. He was blown to an ocean, where he saw a whale. His snotty teacher did not believe his “why I was late” tale.

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Date: 8/10/2022 3:33:00 PM
Hello Caren, I would not believe it either. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/11/2022 4:38:00 AM
Hello Caren, to me it sounds like he made it up while walking to school. Hugs. Yes it does depend on the child.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/11/2022 3:37:00 AM
I would of course pretend to believe, and I imagine you would also Darlene. It depends on which child told us.
Date: 8/9/2022 8:35:00 AM
Hmmm...nor would I, Caren. On the other hand, a really fine adventure shouldn't be believeable!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/9/2022 7:39:00 PM
I believe what you believe, Hank.
Date: 8/8/2022 10:44:00 PM
Some teachers have no imagination, What an exciting journey.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/9/2022 3:51:00 AM
Thank you Shirley for believing it.

Book: Shattered Sighs