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It Was In September

It was in September that Poetry first came to me -
a time when summer’s embers, for me had not yet caught fire
until, that is,  Poetry walked casually toward me
wearing bell bottoms and a young man’s angel face.
Visited by such exquisite grace, I felt the spark of sweet desire’s flame.
Our kisses in the night made my spirit sing; the flame leapt higher.
Yes, a night to remember is what my angel boy  gifted me,
and though the fall was near, I was in the springtime of my youth.

The years have come and        gone            gone           gone
Memories of my old flames are cinders now, softly glowing In my mind.
They cannot be revived to brightly glow again; they are the past.

After Poetry walked in all those years ago,
a few decades passed. One day I felt the urge to put pen to paper.
Recalling nostalgically the fire that once had so consumed me, 
tender words flowed from me; passion was reborn!
Recreating fantasy, I became the lady who danced the unicorn,
who lived, and who still lives romance, again and again and again,
for the passion now is in my pen!

It was in September that Poetry first came to me.
I just didn’t know it then.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Toney Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 9:03 PM
Andrea, thanks for sharing your poetic memories with us. Nicely read. Wow, four pages of comments. Good for you!
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 9:38 PM
Thanks, Mark. This one has lots of traction
Daniel Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 6:29 AM
Such beautiful rendition of the poem, Andrea, love your voice:)
Crandall Avatar
December 28, 2025 at 2:23 PM
Nice poem, and excellent reading. A nice expression of what is so true, about where the pen can take us.
Dietrich Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 12:18 AM
Thanks, David. That guy has probably inspired at least half of my romantic poems!!
Mcintosh Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 5:30 AM
It's an amazing and brilliant poem and so worthy of it's winning placement. I love it so very much, sweet lady. Congratulations! God bless you always and forever, Love, Gina
Anderson Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 10:56 AM
Congratulations for your placement in the "Let There Be Voice" contest. I really enjoyed reading AND hearing your wonderful poem voiced! Cheers and Best Wishes.
Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 11:46 AM
thanks so much.
Gentile Avatar
June 7, 2023 at 4:04 AM
I love your reading voice as well!!!
Radice Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 3:29 AM
Excellent Andrea and your voice adds more depth and meaning to it all. In fact, I'm off to read and listen to your poem again. Your recital is truly wonderful.
Hicks Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 9:46 PM
Oh wow. I nearly forgot about this one you entered for my strange contest! Excellent reading! I feel your inflections, voice breaks, and so on, fall on the key moments that I would expect them to be when reading aloud in my head.
Dietrich Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 1:54 PM
OMG< when I told you to read this, it totally skipped my mind it had been entered into YOUR contest. Well, at least you really inspired me!
Inman Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 7:28 PM
...and so happy we are that it did, Andrea. The first three on my list I do not think you have read.
Gauthier Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 12:31 AM
Lovely ~ we all have this life altering memories ~
Watt Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 2:02 PM
First, this is a wonderful poem, personifying poetry and drawing upon all the passionate memories of the young man who still visits your thoughts of youth. But the revelation is your audio recording! Your inflections add so much dimension: the giggle at "bell bottoms"; romance at "sweet desires flying"; excitement at "made my spirit sing"; wistfulness at "they are the past"; ardor at "passion was reborn"; unexpected delight at "the passion now is in my pen". The story's trajectory comes alive!
Dietrich Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 7:39 PM
thanks for that glowing review of my reading, John . much appreciated!!
Strand Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 5:19 PM
Excellent Andrea,proves my point about recitation amplifies poetry to its apex as an artform.Good to put a voice to a face,of a peer poet I have and known read for perhaps a decade now.You need to recite and read a number of your poems as youtube clips,as a legacy for your grandkids,at least.Cheers
Dietrich Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 5:24 PM
wow, thanks so much for listening to my reading of this. That was very thoughful of you.
Cornish Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 2:03 PM
I usually go to listen to a reading and leave disappointed but not this time--you are a gifted reader and the poem works so well with the theme and enthusiastic presentation.
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July 2, 2016 at 9:30 AM
Wow..??...Andrea, not only was this poetry awesome, you reciting gave me goose bumps! I have read your latest, let me go back and comment on it...your voice is radiant??...have a wonderful Summer dear poet...much love james
Eldridge Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 7:16 PM
Thank you for that identifying walk that I am sure many have journeyed but few were able to express. Congrats!
A  Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 10:52 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your awesome win... Skat
Johnson Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 10:45 PM
I love to be able to hear you read. It connects us in a wonderful new way. I found myself just smiling with the ebb and flow of your inflections. Pure joy.
Haight Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 8:13 AM
Back again to read and listen once more to you recite your lovely poem, Andrea. Congratulations on your wonderful win in Timothy's contest. Hugs, Sandra
Kimathi Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 8:02 AM
Greetings Andrea. Congrats for your well-deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)
Roberts Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 6:55 PM
I love this, makes me remember a sweet September of my own and a boy that made me put pen to paper back then, Congrats on your win Andrea
Roper Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 9:53 AM
Beautifully written, Andrea, and by your soul is put into the read makes one feel the same emotions you have felt. Congratulations on your win Hugs
May Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 7:32 AM
Read with great passion...Congrats on a fine win ...A7....great to hear your voice...hugs
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 2:47 AM
It was so fun hearing your voice Andrea. You read your poem well and I wanted to congratulate you on your super win! #7 ; )
Lamoureux Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 8:00 PM
Great to see this one on the list Andrea. Congratulations.
Chansarkar Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 3:01 PM
Oh wow Andrea,such lovely poem on poetry!Congratulations!
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