It Was a Good Morning Until

My body tenses.
The soft padding of footy pajamas
approach
tiny fingers grip my eyelid
lift it....
Bright eyes gaze into
the freshly opened eye.
A voice shouts....DA!!!
The other eye opens.
Yes I'm in here.
                     ......And he knows it.

His PJ's had that 
"potato in a pocket" hang.
I close my eyes...
reopen them...
he's still there...
he shouts again....DA!

Milk dribbles from his chin
as he struggles
to master the spoon
Cheerios dot his forehead
as he throttles a banana.
The "eye" sips coffee
tries not to laugh.
The dog laps up
his portion of sharing.

It was a good morning.. until
he pried my eye open
then....it became
                      .......A GREAT MORNING


John G. Lawless
2/15/2021

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Date: 3/18/2021 6:31:00 PM
John, Sweet and loving and so visual. I love the pried eye and the Cheerios on the forehead...ah memories ! Thanks for this ! All best to you and belated congrats on POTW ! Susan :)
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Date: 2/28/2021 1:55:00 PM
WoW! John, The contest theme inspired you to write a touching write. The moments your wrote about our priceless. Congratulations on getting the poem of the week. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/26/2021 7:08:00 PM
This is adorable, John, and congrats on potw...
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Date: 2/26/2021 6:41:00 AM
Awww ...those magical moments that make the best memories:) I just love this :)Thanks for the big goofy smile I'm now wearing:)
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Date: 2/23/2021 7:30:00 AM
Congratulations John Lawless on POTD...Well done, my friend.
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Date: 2/23/2021 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem of the week win. So cute and so true. Have a blessed day...................
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Date: 2/22/2021 5:45:00 PM
This is great John. I miss those early days. Congrats on POTD. ;0)
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Date: 2/22/2021 4:27:00 PM
Lovely father and son moments to cherish forever. Congratulations on poem of the week ~ Belle
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Date: 2/22/2021 1:18:00 PM
John, this so beautiful and I adore the images it creates for me! congratulations, well deserved!
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Date: 2/22/2021 8:18:00 AM
John, great poem, so enjoyable to read and a big congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE WEEK, enjoy the honor _Constance
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Date: 2/22/2021 6:00:00 AM
I loved your take in this contest and enjoyed reading this... these are precious moments actually.. being around with kids and family..It surely must have been a Great morning.. Congrats on your POTW. God bless.. ~ Ani
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Date: 2/21/2021 8:18:00 PM
"He pried my eye open, then, it became.. A GREAT MORNING" :) I love everything about this. Your bright eyed and ready to face the day, attitude. Such a cute story about you and your son. Kids are precious indeed. Congratulations John, on Poem of the Week. :) Brandy
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Date: 2/21/2021 3:41:00 PM
John, congratulations on POTW, I don't recall seeing this one in the contest entries, a wonderful poem, enjoyed!
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Date: 2/21/2021 9:54:00 AM
I adore this John! It was wonderfully delightful. Congratulations on your well deserved POTW! I am saving this in my fave! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/21/2021 7:09:00 AM
This brought a smile to my face this morning, John, what a wonderful verse. Congrats on POTW. John
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Date: 2/21/2021 7:08:00 AM
A great morning indeed. Congrats on your POTW.
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John Lawless
Date: 2/21/2021 7:53:00 AM
one of my best "Carpe Diem" moments Richard.
Date: 2/21/2021 7:02:00 AM
Lovely morning to start with your son, great writing, John:) congratulations on POTW:)
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John Lawless
Date: 2/21/2021 7:55:00 AM
Hey, Jo. And now I get to watch that boy recreate those moments in the lives of his young family. Sometime Karma is a good thing. thanks for stopping by.
Date: 2/21/2021 4:41:00 AM
Congratulations on POTW. Enjoy the honour. This one really deserved it. I didn't see any other positive poem on this prompt. Have a wonderful weekend. Take care, Rama
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John Lawless
Date: 2/21/2021 7:52:00 AM
thanks Rama, i just thought I'd have some fun with the contest theme although it was not contest expectations.
Date: 2/18/2021 2:01:00 PM
(not sure but if this is for the contest, weren't there some rhyming rules?)
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2021 12:59:00 PM
I didn't submit it to contest for ..as you say...there were some rhyming rules
Date: 2/18/2021 2:00:00 PM
ok OK, i thought I had seen all the best ones and now I see THIS one. HANDS down, the most creative!!!
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2021 12:58:00 PM
Ya, but like the kid the muse ran down the hallway with an unrhymed box of crayons....
Date: 2/15/2021 10:13:00 AM
Great write, Superb take on the contest. I loved the ending. Positive write.
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John Lawless
Date: 2/15/2021 2:58:00 PM
I learned early never to turn down an invitation to the kids world...
Date: 2/15/2021 9:39:00 AM
John, this piece is so well done. I enjoyed reading it and am marking it as one of my favorites. I wish you every success in the contest.
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John Lawless
Date: 2/15/2021 2:57:00 PM
actually a true experience. My son used to wake me that way - lifting my eyelid to see if I was there....thaks for stopping to read and comment
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