It Was a Good Morning Until

It was a wonderful, perfectly good, morning 
[When I shut off the alarm and slid out of bed], 
Until a broken shoelace screamed a forewarning 
And I got this sudden, overwhelming feeling of dread. 

My Keurig emitted a strange humming sound 
When I filled up the tank and flipped on the switch, 
Meanwhile, my toast popped up too overly-browned, 
Found my computer is sick with a frustrating glitch. 
 
The forecast is gloomy, predicting flurrying snow 
This momentous decision swirls around in my head 
I can face whatever the rest of the day may show 
Or, I can chuck it all and crawl back into bed!  

 

Written February 11, 2021 
For “It Was a Good Morning Until” Contest 
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 2/21/2021 9:33:00 AM
Good day to crawl back into bed and hit the reset button! Congratulations on your win.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/21/2021 9:47:00 AM
Sam, I appreciated your comment. Thanks!
Date: 2/21/2021 6:02:00 AM
...chuck it all and crawl back in bed... Sleep tight LM :) Cute write! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/21/2021 9:46:00 AM
Thanks, Linda. I'll have to admit it was a fun write for a fun contest!
Date: 2/20/2021 10:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/21/2021 9:46:00 AM
Thanks so much, Alexis. You, too!
Date: 2/20/2021 8:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Milton. Hugs Eve
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/21/2021 9:46:00 AM
Thanks, Eve. Hope you're not snowed in like most of the country!
Date: 2/20/2021 7:38:00 PM
Milton, congratulations on your win in Tania's contest with this wonderfully penned poem _Constance
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/21/2021 9:45:00 AM
Thanks for your kind word, Constance.
Date: 2/20/2021 1:51:00 PM
Well done, Milton. Love your last line. Congrats!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/20/2021 2:30:00 PM
Thanks, Line, I appreciated your reading my poem. Thanks for the congrats!
Date: 2/20/2021 1:14:00 PM
I had a feeling this one would be on the winner's list. Congratulations, L M
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/20/2021 1:46:00 PM
Ah, thanks, Jenna. I hoped it would. Thanks for your encouragement.
Date: 2/20/2021 1:03:00 PM
Lol, one of those days where you should have just stayed in bed, congrats on your win. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/20/2021 1:45:00 PM
Yep, Tom, I should've. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 2/20/2021 11:59:00 AM
L Milton, Congratulations on your winning placement, this poem is close to a day I experienced once, enjoyed!
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Date: 2/17/2021 1:42:00 PM
What a day! shoelace to computers!! all the best in the contest!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/17/2021 4:55:00 PM
Thanks, Krish. I'm hopeful....
Date: 2/11/2021 12:34:00 PM
Oh GOODNESS! Go back to bed, and tomorrow...get some new shoe laces. lol
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/11/2021 12:45:00 PM
Thanks for well-taken advice, Jenna!
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