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It Tarries

things like rings just playthings unfit for kings romance, forth it springs to share love's song, it sings my voice, tarried on night's wings soul's symphony, to you it brings this melody within my heart's strings November 4, 2019 Rhyming Nonet Poetry Contest Sponsored by Charles Messina

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/16/2019 11:57:00 AM

This is a gem. Aren't these rhyming nonets fun? Congrats to you.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2019 2:07:00 PM

Thank you so much...i originally wrote gliding dove which turned out beautifully in tri-rhyme scheme then learned we needed to do mono so i kept the original and worked off one segment of it for this one... hugs

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/14/2019 8:31:00 PM

I enjoyed the romance in this entry Sandra. Congratulations on your wonderful second placement! : ) xxoo

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/14/2019 8:49:00 PM

thank you so much my friend...i miss seeing you around, i was so happy to see a comment from you...i originally wrote https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/gliding_dove_1193881 which i liked better then found out it had to be mono rhyme so had to rework it.... hope all is well... hugs :) XoXo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/14/2019 4:27:00 PM

The melody's playing within the heartstrings for your winner in Charlie's contest, Sandra. Congrats to you! Cheers, Gershon

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/14/2019 6:55:00 PM

Thank you Gershon...i originally wrote a tri rhyme one for it, then found out it had to be mono, the other is posted and better in my opinion :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/14/2019 1:13:00 PM

- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Sandra :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/14/2019 6:54:00 PM

thank you so much Anne-Lise.... hugs :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/14/2019 6:55:00 AM

Hi Sandra, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your fine win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/14/2019 11:51:00 AM

Thank you so very much Alexis :) you have a wonderful day as well... hugs

Charles Messina

Date: 11/13/2019 7:52:00 PM

...and I love the melody you have strung together here, with this delightful gem. Congratulations Susan on your win in my contest...hugs // Charlie

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/13/2019 8:01:00 PM

Thank you so much Charlie, for hosting the wonderful contest, for my placement and for your kind words... hugs :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/6/2019 8:53:00 AM

Hi Sandra, This is lovely and well written. A beautiful message of love. It reminds of your previous nonet. You did an amazing job. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/6/2019 9:09:00 AM

Thank you so much Alexis...i wrote the other one first then asked the judge if it had to be mono rhyme, so i had to write this one for the contest :), i hope you have a wonderful day as well.... hugs

Hello There

Date: 11/5/2019 11:03:00 PM

Yes, this is a tricky challenge, but you have done splendidly! Good luck!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/6/2019 9:07:00 AM

Thank you so much HT :) hugs

Juliet Ligon

Date: 11/5/2019 10:11:00 PM

Well done. Nice topic and flows well. I expect this to do well in the contest.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/6/2019 9:06:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend :) hugs

John Hamilton

Date: 11/5/2019 12:16:00 PM

A mono rhyme nonet, not easy even for us rhymers, this is very good, if for a contest, should do well!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/5/2019 12:19:00 PM

Thank you so much John...it is for a contest, a mono rhyme nonet is what the contest is.... hugs :)

John Gondolf

Date: 11/5/2019 7:24:00 AM

Nicely crafted Nonet, Sandy, best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/5/2019 12:07:00 PM

Thank you so very much John... hugs

Chris Green

Date: 11/5/2019 7:09:00 AM

Beautifully crafted poem my friend. What a lovely entry for the contest. I'm thinking a first place this one brings among so many other things. : ) Really well written Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/5/2019 12:07:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear friend, what a kind thing to say, though i think the contest will be tough to judge...i like the other version slightly better... hugs :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/5/2019 6:40:00 AM

Another melodious rendering..I enjoyed the read, Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/5/2019 12:06:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend :) hugs

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/4/2019 11:28:00 PM

You have made this seem easy, and I know it is difficult for I wrote one of these also. Well done Sandra!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/5/2019 12:05:00 PM

it was very difficult for sure...i actually did one that had three sets of rhymes first then asked if it was allowed, it wasn't so i kept the other but used the last 3 lines of this to build off of... thank you Caren... hugs