It Rained That Day


Soft autumn rain ...
cascading over brightly colored cherry blossoms,
releasing a sweet scent of aromatic aphrodisiac
A fragrance of springtime love blowing in the gentle autumn wind

Our two hearts made a vow that day
We promised to fall in love anew
each day all over again
Fall madly in love a thousand times
every twenty-four hour spin

As the light, misty rain came down,
it meet our joyous laughter rising up to the clouds
Two lovebirds being purified,
two souls now joined together
as husband and wife

It rained gently that beautiful day

The maple and evergreen trees
greeted us with a mélange of bright promise,
of an ever evolving love that would last a lifetime
We beheld the colors of change all around us,
holding hands as our lives were changing as well

Upon the lifting of her white veil,
our eyes kissed and our lips looked
for no more words than two
I do
After a pregnant pause, we added another ...
I love you

Then we ran outside,
and frolicked like two little children
Me tugging at her beautiful, African zakiya dress,
she tossing aside my African kente vest
And when we pressed our cheeks together,
the soft autumn rain began to fall ... and we too were falling
more in love

I remember so well,
how it rained that day
How gently the autumn rain fell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 5/9/2020 8:43:00 AM
fine I have seenread Taste like heavensmannerbread Sighpeacegenieune Lovelovecupcake Sweetlyserve Bravo!!! Infinitely Gideon.
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Date: 2/25/2020 11:34:00 PM
The simplicity of memory on those truly special moments, Freddy, ingrain themselves into what becomes a tapestry of beauty in our lives. I hope she reads your poetry. You share so much of yourself in this. Personally, I have difficulty sharing my feels with others, that's why I write.
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Date: 2/13/2020 11:14:00 PM
Freddie, Oh how I enjoy a day in the rain. You brought the rain, the Spring, and the blossom. -Richard
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Date: 2/23/2019 5:35:00 PM
Hello Freddie Robinson, this poem made me feel like i was there. Peace, Love, Joy. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 1/7/2019 1:44:00 PM
This is so romantic! I enjoyed reading this love poem.
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Date: 2/28/2018 3:56:00 PM
This is absolutely beautiful. A fave for sure that I will read again and again. So well written.
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Date: 10/2/2017 4:23:00 PM
I felt as an honored guest at one of the most beautiful portrayals of love!
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Date: 8/18/2017 9:18:00 PM
Oh Freddie, I was completely caught up in your romantic reverie of a special moment in time so lovingly expressed! A beautiful poem full of amazing lines, touching and heartfelt :)
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Date: 5/8/2017 10:04:00 PM
Love the story you told here :) 7
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Date: 3/6/2017 8:51:00 PM
Beautiful memoir of one special day. Rain can be lovely especially the gentle rain which warms the heart.
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Date: 2/23/2017 2:02:00 AM
This the sad plight of the world... congrats on being chosen....
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Date: 2/22/2017 10:41:00 PM
Wow. Good job Freddie, beautifully put together, relaxing and calm poem. Made me feel like I was there witnessing it
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Date: 2/22/2017 8:18:00 PM
WoW! Freddie, This so beautiful and romantic. You have created a lovely poem depicting a timeless love between two people that we all dream of having one day. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved.A without a doubt seven and a fav: -) Alexis
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Date: 2/22/2017 4:57:00 PM
What a lovely piece written for a love laden day. Lucky you!
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Date: 2/22/2017 3:40:00 PM
So beautiful Freddie !! So touching and romantic !!
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Date: 2/22/2017 12:25:00 PM
Freddie!!!!! Wonderful to see you right up where you belong. I am sooooo happy for you. A dreamy romantic poem .
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Date: 2/22/2017 11:16:00 AM
Wow..What a stunning piece of poetry! What a beautiful wedding day you have elegantly penned. The love and joy so tenderly expressed, It is a pleasure to read such fine writing :-) Congratulations on POTD blessings, lynn
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Date: 2/22/2017 11:03:00 AM
Ty, everyone for your gracious comments. I am humbled always by being surrounded by a constellation of talented poets/poetesses. You all shine as bright or brighter than this simple message poet. Much love to you all always. Romantic Warrior
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/11/2025 3:53:00 PM
Coo coo cachoo
Date: 2/22/2017 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations Freddie on this absolutely beautiful poem of yours. So lovely indeed and a fave for me too :)
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Date: 2/22/2017 9:51:00 AM
Oh you are talented.How amazingly beautiful this is..I could visualize the day..the wedding..the frolicking together..The African costumes..Awesome..A fave
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Date: 2/22/2017 9:48:00 AM
Oh my, you took my breath away! Beautiful lines...congrats on TPOD! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/22/2017 8:47:00 AM
Lovely indeed ... Congratulations ....
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/11/2025 3:53:00 PM
Probe here!
Date: 2/22/2017 8:19:00 AM
Congratulations Freddie, a beautiful rendering of a magical everlasting moment; potd well deserved xomo & 7 my friend
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Date: 2/22/2017 8:17:00 AM
- Raindrops of love and happiness ... lovely written Freddie - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/22/2017 8:00:00 AM
So touching...my eyes softened reading these lines. Deep and passionate. Well done!! :)
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