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It Only Hurts When I Fantasize

Intimate relations
          bring elation to some
        but to others frustration

        In which case
          they may take a vacation
        or try partner rotation

        Rare is the homosapien
          who selects amputation

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Bill Baker

Date: 6/4/2022 3:36:00 PM

Ouch! that's not an option. Cute verse, Gershon. Keeping it light, leave the knife at home. Bill

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/3/2022 10:15:00 AM

Oh my, I think not, gw. I'll keep all of my equipment even if it is nonfunctional--occasionally.

Jeff Kyser

Date: 6/3/2022 4:11:00 AM

“After some confusion, the dangling modifier was eliminated”