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It Must Be

It must be The way I looked at her Or The way “Hello” croaked She must have been Having a bad day Or Didn’t about something get her way It must be The way I dressed Or The gravy stain on my vest It might have been Something in her eye made her close her eye Screw up her face and cry “GET LOST!” Is it me? It must be .............................................................................. The poem has nothing to do with Beethoven, opus 135

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Date: 1/2/2011 10:13:00 PM
Here I am again ,fourth time. haha. Daver, I'm sorry, I keep going to poems of yours I have seen. I would not be surprised that I have seen all your poetry, but I bet somewhere is one or two I never got to. Anyway, I so appreciate you reading mine. If I didn't say it to you yet, have a bessed New Year. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/7/2010 10:22:00 PM
well,not a new one. But I enjoyed reading it again! I think page two is covered. NOw for page three!
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Date: 4/9/2010 3:18:00 PM
Daver, I came to find that poem you referred me to because I thought you said it was above the naked man poem. Anyway, I think I have seen all page one poems now. NExt time i need to start a new page! Have a good evening. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/19/2010 6:44:00 AM
I really like this Daver. I am noticing you do really enjoyable poetry but you don't poat a lot of new ones. gosh, I hope you put some up for us because I will soon be down to the bottom of this list of your poems! Thanks for your comment. LUv, andrea
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Date: 1/5/2010 3:24:00 PM
Nah! couldn't have been! enjoy your poems Daver. Thanks
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Date: 11/10/2009 11:51:00 AM
Like the touch of humor here. Hey, we all have our bad days. I like the interesting visual presentation. Creative poem. Thank you for sharing it. Karen
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Date: 11/9/2009 5:13:00 PM
nawwwww sometimes folks strike out because the "other" is a stranger and they think they CAN so they DO..if she new how nice you are she'd never be so mean! Light & Love
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Date: 11/9/2009 5:04:00 AM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Maybe it was a bad day. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 11/8/2009 3:51:00 PM
We often blame ourselves, for someone else's bad behavior....in your case.......it was her having a bad day....guaranteed!!~ Love Carrie
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Date: 11/8/2009 3:12:00 PM
It might have been you but I doubt it..I go with "a bad day"..how are you..been looking for something by you. BG
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Date: 11/8/2009 12:46:00 PM
Very Nice...enjoyed...Marty
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