It Is Clear Now

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It is clear now, heart’s toroidal We’re still yet currents flow Centre of bliss grid ovoidal Behold heart lotus grow That that is, simply is The magnetic love fizz With each breath, here, now, this Take a deep bow It is clear now 11-May-2022 Quietus

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/11/2022 10:25:00 PM

Hope that's not a black hole!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/11/2022 11:14:00 PM

A supernova in your heart, Victor! How lucky can you get?

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/11/2022 6:57:00 PM

Oh, my ! This breathtaking photo matches your words perfectly. You have created a masterpiece, my dear friend. "With each breath, take a deep bow." Yes, indeed. :) Brandy

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/11/2022 8:24:00 PM

Thank you, Brandy