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It Happened On a Rainy Night

Foggy mists engulfed the bright 
When raindrops fell throughout the night 
The lampposts glowed at midnights dark 
When sweethearts kissed at Lover's Park

Seductively waltzed as raindrops danced in the air
Expressing their love that started as a merely affair
All of a sudden lightening struck the near by lamppost
Lighting up the foggy night as they saw a ghost 

(The  first Stanza by Charles Messina)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 9/13/2023 7:44:00 PM
Tania, I loved your stanza. Thanks for entering my contest... It just didn't mix well with the collaborated poem I came up with. Congrats on your well written stanza :) Charlie
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/14/2023 3:50:00 AM
Charlie, thank you for your sweet comment.
Date: 9/7/2023 11:44:00 AM
What a way to leave us readers wondering about that ghost!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/7/2023 4:06:00 PM
Lin, thank you, I love a little mystery and romance together!
Date: 9/7/2023 1:22:00 AM
Don't suppose ghosts get wet :) Lovely stanza. Best for a win.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/7/2023 3:29:00 AM
Victor, thank you, hugs.

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