~ First Place ~ Premiere Contest: It Happened On A Rainy Night - Collaboration Sponsor: Charles Messina
(first stanza by Charles Messina)
September 4, 2023 __________________________________________
Foggy mists engulfed the bright When raindrops fell throughout the night The lampposts glowed at midnights dark When sweethearts kissed at Lover’s Park The fluid rhythms, realm of rain Where lamplight’s stream did gild the lane Wet leaves dripped dreams from tinseled trees And pulses flowed like rolling seas
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