It Happened On a Rainy Night

Foggy mists engulfed the bright 
When raindrops fell throughout the night 
The lampposts glowed at midnights dark 
When sweethearts kissed at Lover's Park
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kingston Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 5:59 PM
This poem would be nice to read in a Valentine's Day card, or to whisper to your honey under the stars. Where is Lover's Park anyway? I must go in my silvery dress with my husband dressed in his Italian best.
Empress Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 9:38 AM
Beautiful rhymes and flow of words, such a passionate and romantic ambience depicting an embrace worth remembering. Love this
Downing  Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 8:01 PM
A kiss in the rain is just very romantic. A sweet poem, Charlie :)
Baker Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 11:26 AM
Nice prompt for the contest, Charles. Nice setting. Bill
Kauffman Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 10:01 AM
Hi Charlie! Not only is this romantic but you have created a cozy atmosphere with glowing lampposts and listening to the rain! Lovely. Blessings!
Buhagiar Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 2:17 AM
Excellent poem. Kissing in the rain can be fun.
Ashley Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 5:08 PM
Dear Charlie, I agree with Eddie Rabbitt's old song; "I love a rainy night", but it's even better when two sweethearts can enjoy it together. A wonderfully romantic piece. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
La France Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 5:58 AM
Charlie, lovely and romantic
One Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 12:04 PM
aww a kiss during the rain.. that will warm up the cold night.. nice one.
Merryman Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 7:00 PM
I can easily picture this romantic scene! I enjoyed your poem, Charlie! Blessings, Kim M
Andresen Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 1:05 PM
... a wet kiss :) - Sweet poem, Charlie :) - hugs
M  Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 7:52 AM
Aww Charlie lovely bit of romance there!! Debx
Mcintosh Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 4:28 AM
Lovely write. Enjoyed. God bless you, friend. Love, Gina
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