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It Happened On a Rainy Night - a Collaboration With Charles Messina

Foggy mists engulfed the bright When raindrops fell throughout the night The lampposts glowed at midnights dark When sweethearts kissed at Lover’s Park The morning rose with glistening light The rain dampened fire flamed its last firelight Tender smiles opened eyes glowing as lovers do As embers of passion lifted and flew

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Date: 9/11/2023 8:52:00 PM
Sweet passion. So many good ones were in that contest.
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Date: 9/8/2023 2:54:00 PM
Those lovely embers of passion! Nice collab!
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 9/11/2023 6:51:00 PM
Thank you Kim for the nice comment. Lona
Date: 9/6/2023 11:04:00 AM
This is a gorgeous, romantic poem Lonna. Loved the last line,’ As embers of passion lifted and flew’. So enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Warmest wishes.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 9/11/2023 6:52:00 PM
Thank you Christina for your wonderful comment. Lonna

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