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It Happened On a Rainy Night-Collaboration

Foggy mists engulfed the bright When raindrops fell throughout the night The lampposts glowed at midnights dark When sweethearts kissed at Lover's Park A kiss that did not last Our lips said goodnight way too fast Raindrops fell down on your beautiful face Please just one more warm embrace

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Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 10/1/2023 5:46:00 AM

This is so lovely Paula! I enjoyed reading your romantic poem today. A big fav for me :-)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/1/2023 12:12:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed reading my write. Yes Romantic... I see fav??? That made my day happy. Thanks... I took 3 weeks off of the computer. I needed a rest. I am writing again. Have a blessed day writing away..................

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/14/2023 8:04:00 AM

Romantic sweetness in your words Paula! :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/1/2023 12:09:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found this write to be romantic/sweet. I am trying to answer everyone after being off for 3 weeks. Have a blessed day writing away..................

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 9/7/2023 3:45:00 PM

I really liked this one Paula, so wonderfully descriptive and romantic.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/8/2023 12:12:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my write. Romantic lovers kisses/emotions must wait for now. Have a blessed day writing away..................

I Am Anaya

Date: 9/5/2023 8:17:00 PM

Kisses interrupted, grand to run hand in hand and to continue another day of emotions crescendoing into a poignant indilible moment of communal ecstasy. Bol, Paula!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/5/2023 8:32:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my lovers write. Yes, romantic kisses/emotions must wait for now. Will the rain wash it all away??? Have a blessed day writing away..................

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/5/2023 11:01:00 AM

Paula, this is so beautifully written. Not only with the sense of the romantic moment, but with the knowledge that this stolen moment will end in longing for another kiss! Well done, my friend! Blessings!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/5/2023 7:49:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my lovers write. Yes, a stolen moment yet waiting for another romantic kiss. Have a blessed day writing away..................

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/4/2023 8:05:00 AM

Yearning for that love that's lessened somewhat, great take, Paula:)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/4/2023 10:32:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this lovers write. Just a write/not true. Have a blessed day writing away..................

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/4/2023 5:09:00 AM

I hope that the last embrace brought back all the love and yearning felt for one another. If it felt that this embrace was the end, rather sooner than later. Wonderful write dear Paula. BLESSINGS, AND HUGS, Jennifer

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/4/2023 10:30:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my lovers write. It is just a write/not true but could be true for some. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away..................

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/4/2023 3:53:00 AM

Ohh, you certainly took a very unique and palpable perspective for the contest.. The yearning can be felt deep in the heart when love slipped away too fast, kind of a sombre ambience have been developed here.. But still open to interpretation.. Love this so much, absolutely beautiful! :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/4/2023 10:28:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you love this and found this write to be absolutely beautiful. That makes me happy. Have a blessed day writing away..................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/3/2023 4:06:00 PM

I enjoyed your lovely and mysteriously romantic jewel of a poem, Paula. Best of wishes. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/4/2023 10:25:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you found this write to be a mysteriously romantic jewel. Have a blessed day writing away..................

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/3/2023 4:02:00 PM

A lovely input for the collaboration poem Paula. Blessings, Belle

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/4/2023 10:23:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my write/collaboration. Have a blessed day writing away..................

David Kavanagh

Date: 9/3/2023 2:19:00 PM

I like the different direction you took here Paula, yet still leave it open ended for another stanza to kick in, nice follow on here, all the best in contest, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/4/2023 10:22:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your best. Glad to hear you like the different direction I took and how it is still open ended for another stanza. Cheers... Have a blessed day writing away..................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/3/2023 12:28:00 PM

It Happened On A Rainy Night-Collaboration ~ Date Written:9/3/2023