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It Happened On a Rainy Night- Multi-Collaboration

Foggy mists engulfed the bright When raindrops fell throughout the night The lampposts glowed at midnights dark, When sweethearts kissed at Lover's Park Soaked wet through with glistening skin Revealing all true love within Drenched and over awed by charms Entranced as held in each other's arms The fluid rhythms, realm of rain Where lamplights stream did gild the lane Wet leaves dripped dreams from tinseled trees And pulses flowed like rolling seas The sultry spark of lover's kiss Roused the feeling of lukewarm bliss The tender touch of misty blow Caused the heated hearts to glow They sizzled and sparked like firework display The world around them faded away Transported to another place Locked inside their warm embrace Together they braved the soaking rains For they were lost in lover's lanes They could not bear to say goodbyes Lost in the storm of lover's eyes Passions roused beneath a silent moon Hanging onto skies where stars are strewn Rhythms of dreams ripe for the taking Trembling in the kisses, utterly earthshaking "Waves gently lapped the shore nearby As we embraced, my love and I My fingers touched my sweethearts hair It felt like silk, so soft and fair" Twas the splendour of their sweet kiss That led to years of intense bliss Gentle rainfall a lamppost glow Enhanced the stellar, long ago Although the rain then turned to hail, They kissed until the moon was pale; And he was found by mornings light, alone, all drained of blood and white Stanza 1 (Charles Messina) Stanza 2 (Dilly Dally) Stanza 3 (Susan Ashley) Stanza 4 (Roger Carvis) Stanza 5 (Natasha L Scragg) Stanza 6 (Andy Chunn) Stanza 7 (Regina McIntosh) Stanza 8 (Andrea Dietrich) Stanza 9 (Belle Bellevue) Stanza 10 (Jack Horne)

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Date: 9/16/2023 3:13:00 PM
LOve the way you've put these together - so happy to be a part of this
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Date: 9/14/2023 1:50:00 AM
Wow! Such a brilliant composition of many inspired minds working together, and that's a surprise ending:) Charlie you have interweaved them into a beautiful composite whole:)
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Date: 9/13/2023 12:56:00 PM
Charles, just overwhelming, I agree with Tom..we must expose this priceless collaboration. You did absolutely well, chosing, creme de la creme. I love, love it! Bravo chico!
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Date: 9/12/2023 5:48:00 AM
Hey Charles this really deserves more attention than it's getting. Would have made an awesome potd. Always nice to see poets working together instead of against one another. Jack has a bit of Poe in him I see
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Date: 9/12/2023 5:45:00 AM
Charlie, Love this collaboration of words, heart and spirit ! Such a gift to read the woven journey of passion ! Beautifully done . Great work by all ! Hugs, Susan :)
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Date: 9/11/2023 3:02:00 AM
Great collaboration well done everyone.
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Date: 9/11/2023 2:07:00 AM
Wow. Such a surprise for sure. Wow. Love it. God bless you with love, Gina
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Date: 9/10/2023 9:52:00 AM
and what a surpride ending.
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Date: 9/10/2023 9:51:00 AM
I agree with Victor's definition of "ethereal beauty" Amazing work by all the poets. Thanks so much for including me!!
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Date: 9/9/2023 1:59:00 AM
This is ethereal poetry. A collaboration of so many poets yet the whole is flowing and beautiful.
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Date: 9/8/2023 11:35:00 PM
This is wonderful... Thank you very much...
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Date: 9/8/2023 6:05:00 PM
Dear Charlie, this is amazing! What a wonderful way to inspire poets to come together in creative collaboration. Congratulations to all the poets involved, and to you too, Charlie, for your poetic inspiration and for arranging the stanzas into such a splendid poem that showcases the gifted poets of PS so wonderfully. Love the plot twisting end too.. thanks Jack! Your sponsorship of such a lovely contest is truly appreciated, Charlie. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/8/2023 3:02:00 PM
This has come out so brilliantly! Well done everyone and Charles for the invitation to share in this Collab :-D
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Charles Messina
Date: 9/8/2023 3:58:00 PM
Thank you, Natasha. Congrats again!
Date: 9/8/2023 2:38:00 PM
I love the surprise ending! Well done *edits* Jack! :)
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Charles Messina
Date: 9/8/2023 4:07:00 PM
My apologies...the last stanza was written by Jack Horne. Oops!
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Charles Messina
Date: 9/8/2023 3:59:00 PM
A terrific ending indeed! Congrats again, D.D.
Date: 9/8/2023 2:21:00 PM
A fantastic collaboration, well done Charles and all poets involved… Belle
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Charles Messina
Date: 9/8/2023 3:59:00 PM
Thank you, Belle. Congrats again!

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