It Flies

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7/30/2024 for BiteSize Poem no87 Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier

Today, she sits alone, with her thoughts unknown...and sighs. Before her lies a stone. The weeds are overgrown. She cries. A lark lights where sun once shone - a mem'ry the wind has blown. It flies.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 7/4/2024 6:31:00 PM

Dear David, your soulful poem is beautiful in its poignant brevity. Such lovely emotion and imagery and I adore your rhyme scheme.. it works so well with a short emotive, evocative, rhythmic piece like this. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan

David Crandall
Date: 7/4/2024 9:53:00 PM

Thanks Susan...and thanks ;-) I think I saw that rhyme scheme somewhere, or it came to me or something, but I also like it.