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Island Rhythms

an empty black sea
stretches endlessly before me

the throbbing spirit of the drums
a  fiery jolt of electricity
that dances through my soul

the old city ugly and abandoned
it's screams silent
all ambition gone
fragile destiny embraced

nimble crimson legs race
along the waters edge
delicate pink wings outstretched
grace and beauty combine
with a foofaraw of honking and babbling

slipping through the guard
of gnarled weeping willows
I slip the rusty key into my pocket
before joining my comrades
for a glass of newly uncorked wine 
the emerald garden on my mind

tonight will be our farewell
I intend not to return to my fallow life
they will seek me but for a while
slipping  away in the night I will be no more
treasure without limit  lies beneath the nests
delicate creatures once chiseled into stone
The embodiment of the god Ra

I welcome the winds of change
the loud thumping  of my heart
keeping  perfect time
with the ancient island rhythms

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/17/2009 10:05:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today. Thank you Patricia. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/16/2009 1:24:00 PM
You capture well the spirit of the ancient island's rhythms, Patricia. The description of slipping back into the garden to say farewell to your friends is awesome! Love, Carolyn
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