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Island I live on an Island I am all on my own I am surrounded by water I have nothing to see I have lots of coconut I have banana trees Fish coconut banana for tea Give me a break I want to escape To another Island With fresh lemon tea And a big apple tree

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Date: 12/21/2017 9:00:00 AM
settling on varieties of oolong lately, meself, Niall...understand yearnings for citrus trees, not possible here...high of -2 degrees below zero Xmas Day! Ohhh...the condensed air outside is like walking and breathing a device at a Hong Kong Oxygen Bar! you can actually feel your bloodstream oxygenate & the increased energy sensation!
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Date: 6/2/2017 5:53:00 PM
You can't have any better than the organic fresh fish, coconut, and banana. Although I know you're wishing for a nice cold beer and a big burger. Lol! I too grew up on an island and like a curious monkey traveled away on an adventure to explore the world... lol!
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Niall Fulham
Date: 6/2/2017 6:33:00 PM
Hi Akkina , lol you can read my mind:))))) hugs
Date: 6/1/2017 4:08:00 PM
I live on a little Island too lol wish we had warmer weather and coconuts and bananas grew here lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Niall Fulham
Date: 6/1/2017 4:40:00 PM
Hi Jan , very sad to lose Charmaine I hope she comes back :(( hugs
Date: 5/31/2017 10:49:00 PM
Fish, coconut, and banana? mmmm sounds good, but I guess you want more variety? Nice little poem, Niall :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 6/1/2017 11:49:00 AM
Hi Becca , lol I was not asking for much in this little poem :))))hugs

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