Isa

(Isa was an ESL student of mine from a small island country off Africa. The students were learning about limericks, and I wrote this one for Isa, because she really did love junk food!)

A lover of junk food, sweet Isa
was happy when she got her Visa.
For with it in hand,
she left for the land
of burgers and french fries and pizza!


(featured but never in a contest)

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/8/2014 1:53:00 AM

I really like this fun and clever poem, Andrea. Nice work! Congrats on your win!

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/3/2014 2:00:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea. Cute little poem. I can imagine it was a wonderful trip for the young lady.

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 9/23/2013 5:15:00 PM

I love your limericks. I'm sure that Isa loved this limerick. So well crafted. Bravo!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/11/2013 6:58:00 AM

Hello, Andrea, , '''CONGRATULATIONS''' On your featured poem of the week... Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... -XOX- Love Linda

Randy Curry

Date: 8/9/2013 8:10:00 PM

now that was a good haha. your wit shines bright. congrats, ran

Donna Jones

Date: 8/8/2013 7:43:00 PM

Love it Andrea....congratulations on being featured this week...

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/8/2013 8:44:00 AM

a funny poem that brought smiles Andrea congrats on being featured Shadow x smiles

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 8/7/2013 12:36:00 AM

Tasty poem.I like it.

Daver Austin

Date: 8/6/2013 9:29:00 AM

Congrats on this tasty work being selected. Love, daver

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/2/2012 4:38:00 PM

continuing my education, like Chris below, again browsing through your work. Oh i forget. wonderful limerick. harry

Kash Poet

Date: 1/12/2011 1:35:00 AM

Nice limerick!

Sean Kelly

Date: 5/27/2010 7:30:00 AM

PS , SEVEN out of 7 .....

Sean Kelly

Date: 5/27/2010 7:28:00 AM

So Teacher condoned all this eating . Each meal gobbled up with this greeting . " Oh Mamma Mia . You can blame Andrea . My bum's got too big for the seating ". Great reply to the "replies" blog as you hit the nail BANG on the head . Seeeeee , I DO read the poem completely !!!! . You ARE good , so write onnnnnnnnn ....

Skat A

Date: 3/19/2010 5:51:00 PM

lol... it's nice to have so much choices on the junk food... but there is a limit lol

Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/5/2010 7:50:00 PM

ah ha. i hope she doesn't eat too much. and sorry i've been extra crazy with everything. oh and i wasn't exactly done with the poem yet, so i just posted it to finish the ending. i wanted to make it sound kind of curious. but i finished it. only a few words. Isa can get her eat on for sure! -Always Lynette

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/17/2010 4:30:00 PM

LOL so good I love Limericks! Light & Love and thanks for all the readinyou're doing ;)

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/17/2010 11:28:00 AM

LOL! You are such a clever, talented delight! Well done! Thanks so much for your kind congrats on my Flower Child. You are also very thoughtful and it is so nice to know you. sorry, can't come back yet. warmest wishes to you. hugs, shar xoxo

David Byrne

Date: 1/14/2010 2:55:00 PM

Charming!

Elaine George

Date: 1/13/2010 2:27:00 AM

AWESOME!!!!! I am still laughing out loud as I type this. Love, Lainie

Elaine George

Date: 1/13/2010 2:27:00 AM

AWESOME!!!!! I am still laughing out loud as I type this. Love, Lainie

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/11/2010 9:36:00 AM

This made me smile, too :) but yup, have to agree with Sara, hopefully she didn't eat too much of it :) and also, hopefully that the States has lived up to all of her dreams about it :) Thanks for this amusing limerick--now I want a whopper! ;) Thanks for your inspiring comments, it really means a lot ^_^

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/11/2010 8:52:00 AM

The occasional treat of junk food is great but too much is not great for our health. I hope that Isa with her Visa didn't consume too much too cause her grief ..weight or financial wise. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for the comments on my poem "Another Use For Duct Tape". This is a true event in my life. I can still see the young men's faces when they thought that it was funny and that he would think that something was wrong with the car but when he just went onto the road change. S

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/10/2010 12:38:00 AM

Cute one Andrea. I admire that you share your enthusiasm of poetry with your students.

Danny Nunn

Date: 1/9/2010 7:24:00 PM

Light hearted and made me smile, good write..Thanks on Loco Weed. I doubt that many on Poetry Soup know what it is? Yes I have cowbyed and ranch in NM and Texas most of my life...Thanks Danny