Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

Is This For Real

I shall but wait for you by the riverside
Until our breaths meet, no shadow could hold
This autumn, next summer, all cycles tied
Entrusting moonlit prayers to unfold
Sweetness of a return from battles cold,
That angels guide you home, a joy extolled-
Affirming strength of this love, so daring
Despite time's ploy, our hope unwavering,


Contest for Nayda Ivette Negron
5/19.2016

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James Inman May 22, 2016 at 9:29 PM Emotionally intense poem Nayda, a wonderful write.

Len Gasun May 21, 2016 at 3:30 AM I'm deeply moved by this wonderful poem of yours my dearest friend, Nette! Congratulations on your win! Thank you so much for sharing! I've read your poems many times if you don't mind, not only this one but the others, too and I'm sooo grateful. Thanks a lot! A blessed weekend! love lots and big hug, Lorry.GL

Karam Misra May 21, 2016 at 1:58 AM Congratulations, Nette, on your win. Your poem out the anguish of loss wonderfully. ~karam~

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores May 20, 2016 at 2:09 PM Congratulations Nette on the placement of the contest

Bl Devnath May 19, 2016 at 4:42 PM Very sad reality beautifully expressed my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Sara Chansarkar May 19, 2016 at 12:19 PM Yes,reality hits hard and deep!Loved it Nette!

Arthur Vaso May 18, 2016 at 10:36 PM wow, I wasn't sure where this was going, what a emotional powerful poem! Loved it Nette!

Constance La France May 18, 2016 at 4:25 PM nette this is wonderfully penned for the contest, I am loving it 7 ~

Jajosh Ongado May 18, 2016 at 3:48 PM Accepting reality is the acknowledging one's strength. Your poetic style is extraordinary as I feel you here!

Walter T. Ashe May 18, 2016 at 11:43 AM The expressed "anger" in this write is made all the more understood by the last line question! This brings the "sadness" into clearer focus! Felt deeply! The best to you in this contest Nette! :-)