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Is This For Real

I shall but wait for you by the riverside Until our breaths meet, no shadow could hold This autumn, next summer, all cycles tied Entrusting moonlit prayers to unfold Sweetness of a return from battles cold, That angels guide you home, a joy extolled- Affirming strength of this love, so daring Despite time's ploy, our hope unwavering, Contest for Nayda Ivette Negron 5/19.2016

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Date: 5/22/2016 9:29:00 PM
Emotionally intense poem Nayda, a wonderful write.
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Date: 5/21/2016 3:30:00 AM
I'm deeply moved by this wonderful poem of yours my dearest friend, Nette! Congratulations on your win! Thank you so much for sharing! I've read your poems many times if you don't mind, not only this one but the others, too and I'm sooo grateful. Thanks a lot! A blessed weekend! love lots and big hug, Lorry.GL
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Date: 5/21/2016 1:58:00 AM
Congratulations, Nette, on your win. Your poem out the anguish of loss wonderfully. ~karam~
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Date: 5/20/2016 2:09:00 PM
Congratulations Nette on the placement of the contest
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Date: 5/19/2016 4:42:00 PM
Very sad reality beautifully expressed my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/19/2016 12:19:00 PM
Yes,reality hits hard and deep!Loved it Nette!
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Date: 5/18/2016 10:36:00 PM
wow, I wasn't sure where this was going, what a emotional powerful poem! Loved it Nette!
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Date: 5/18/2016 4:25:00 PM
nette this is wonderfully penned for the contest, I am loving it 7 ~
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Date: 5/18/2016 3:48:00 PM
Accepting reality is the acknowledging one's strength. Your poetic style is extraordinary as I feel you here!
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Date: 5/18/2016 11:43:00 AM
The expressed "anger" in this write is made all the more understood by the last line question! This brings the "sadness" into clearer focus! Felt deeply! The best to you in this contest Nette! :-)
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