Constance La France Poet Monorhyme

Is That Right Said Grandpa

 
Sad girl, can you hear the wind in the trees whistling,
That is your grandpa with his tune like a bird visiting;
Always recall him with Ella, crystal blue eyes shining,
Not a day will go by that he is not up above listening;
And his favorite cardigan sweater- he is still wearing.

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March 20, 2016

Poetry/Monorhyme/Is That Right Said Grandpa
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For the contest, Personal Memories, Monorhyme
sponsor, Laura Loo

First Place

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Eve Roper April 4, 2016 at 10:27 AM Great memories you have painted, Broken Wing, congratulations on your win!!!! Constance La France April 5, 2016 at 2:49 AM Eve, thanks so much for the congratulations !

Brian Davey April 1, 2016 at 7:07 PM Another wonderful top notch to add to your belt. Congrats Constance La France April 1, 2016 at 7:27 PM Brian, thanks so much for the compliment and the congrats !

Teddy Kimathi March 31, 2016 at 3:25 AM Beautiful, enchanting, and mystic!!! Congrats BW, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-) Constance La France March 31, 2016 at 9:09 AM Teddy, thanks for visiting with the lovely comment and congrats, appreciate ~

Balveen Cheema March 31, 2016 at 1:46 AM So warmly written, Constance! Constance La France March 31, 2016 at 9:16 AM Balveen, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate !

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 31, 2016 at 12:29 AM Congrats on ur deserved top podium with this awesome write Broken.. Constance La France March 31, 2016 at 9:18 AM Upma, thanks for the congrat and the awesome !

Beautiful Scars March 30, 2016 at 9:10 PM Oh my word Broken Wings..yes I shed a tiny tear his death is still constantly on my mind and in my heart. Perfect..thank you for your entry :)-luloo Constance La France March 31, 2016 at 6:01 PM Laura, thank you so much for my placement, I am very honored ~

Thomas Martin March 21, 2016 at 1:16 PM Excellent use of monorhyme! Enjoyed! Constance La France March 21, 2016 at 2:12 PM Thomas, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate !

Tom Quigley March 20, 2016 at 8:47 PM Very sweet. Constance La France March 21, 2016 at 3:09 PM Tom, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciated !

Jan Allison March 20, 2016 at 1:41 PM Such a touching write to accompany the picture - i think Luloo will find it very emotional judging this contest:-) hugs janxx Constance La France March 20, 2016 at 4:36 PM Jan, thanks for the compliment, I know that I would find it emotional..