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Is That Right Said Grandpa

 
Sad girl, can you hear the wind in the trees whistling, That is your grandpa with his tune like a bird visiting; Always recall him with Ella, crystal blue eyes shining, Not a day will go by that he is not up above listening; And his favorite cardigan sweater- he is still wearing. _____________________ March 20, 2016 Poetry/Monorhyme/Is That Right Said Grandpa Copyright Protected, ID 16-770-179-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Personal Memories, Monorhyme sponsor, Laura Loo First Place

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Date: 4/4/2016 10:27:00 AM
Great memories you have painted, Broken Wing, congratulations on your win!!!!
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Dear Heart
Date: 4/5/2016 2:49:00 AM
Eve, thanks so much for the congratulations !
Date: 4/1/2016 7:07:00 PM
Another wonderful top notch to add to your belt. Congrats
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Dear Heart
Date: 4/1/2016 7:27:00 PM
Brian, thanks so much for the compliment and the congrats !
Date: 3/31/2016 3:25:00 AM
Beautiful, enchanting, and mystic!!! Congrats BW, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Dear Heart
Date: 3/31/2016 9:09:00 AM
Teddy, thanks for visiting with the lovely comment and congrats, appreciate ~
Date: 3/31/2016 1:46:00 AM
So warmly written, Constance!
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Dear Heart
Date: 3/31/2016 9:16:00 AM
Balveen, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate !
Date: 3/31/2016 12:29:00 AM
Congrats on ur deserved top podium with this awesome write Broken..
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Dear Heart
Date: 3/31/2016 9:18:00 AM
Upma, thanks for the congrat and the awesome !
Date: 3/30/2016 9:10:00 PM
Oh my word Broken Wings..yes I shed a tiny tear his death is still constantly on my mind and in my heart. Perfect..thank you for your entry :)-luloo
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Dear Heart
Date: 3/31/2016 6:01:00 PM
Laura, thank you so much for my placement, I am very honored ~
Date: 3/21/2016 1:16:00 PM
Excellent use of monorhyme! Enjoyed!
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Dear Heart
Date: 3/21/2016 2:12:00 PM
Thomas, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate !
Date: 3/21/2016 7:04:00 AM
An emotional and touching write, Constance. A7. Best wishes for the contest. T.J
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Dear Heart
Date: 3/21/2016 2:45:00 PM
Teppo thanks for the compliments and the 7 !
Date: 3/20/2016 8:47:00 PM
Very sweet.
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Dear Heart
Date: 3/21/2016 3:09:00 PM
Tom, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciated !
Date: 3/20/2016 1:41:00 PM
Such a touching write to accompany the picture - i think Luloo will find it very emotional judging this contest:-) hugs janxx
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Dear Heart
Date: 3/20/2016 4:36:00 PM
Jan, thanks for the compliment, I know that I would find it emotional..