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Is That a Dino I Saur

Two Dinosaurs stand face to face
But something is so out of place
A starry night in the sky
But it's a starfish I spy
Oh! that line of cocaine that I chased

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/14/2011 1:54:00 PM

Good luck in the contest if for the contest..Reads like winning material..I hope that was just for a chuckle..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/14/2011 11:28:00 AM

sparkling read, james... you see the world through eyes of wonderment!! crisp and innovative.. any new piece?? miss your writes! winner for me..:) hope you can peep through my FIRST BLOG; ain;t no princess as i posted my photo, lol! :)huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/10/2011 8:27:00 PM

Potent James Potent lines should do well in Robb's contest.. high dinos..what a concept luv..good luck...

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/10/2011 9:45:00 AM

I love the witty word play in your title here, loved the limerick even more --;) wish you the best in the contest :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2011 1:30:00 PM

by the way, when you say the word saw, do you say it like Saur? Just curious. I think some english speakers have that kind of accent.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2011 1:29:00 PM

hahaha, well, you did something with that picture anyway!! Cute, James.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/9/2011 1:03:00 PM

Well read picture with nice humorous approach. James

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/9/2011 12:39:00 PM

Funny one James..ithe pic is kind of "dreamy"... lol BG

Jl Sadberry

Date: 4/9/2011 11:10:00 AM

Smile, *^_^* Yes, cocain*, that will do it my friend. = And Yes, John, I, and and a few of Our closest and Most dearest of Love and friends, All shared the same Mentor, dear James. == Quite a spin cycle poe with a touch of irony somewhat and 'thank you,' for stopping by; hope your were'nt spoooked too much. === love always, jasper