Is She the One...

As I watch her rhythmic movements, her beauty entrances me,
Never have I seen such magnificence, she’s as perfect as she can be;

When I saw her for the first time, she stopped me in my tracks,
And in her exquisitely flawless nature, I can see nothing that she lacks;

I have looked her up and down, she is irresistible in my eyes,
For all the other hopefuls out there, it’s time to say your goodbyes; 

Her faultlessly cadenced beat, sends shivers up my spine,
And I can hardly wait for the day, when I can call her mine; 

Is she the one for me, I know she is without a doubt,
And spending my time with her is what my life is all about; 
 
She is charming and bewitching in every single way,
Her skin tone is amazing, the perfect dappled gray;

That’s right my perfect love is an Andalusian Mare,
And her everlasting beauty is beyond all compare!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 29, 2010 at 8:06 AM
wow! Tirzah, this is captavating, enjoyed your poem... have a nice one ,,..Sidney LeeAnn
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June 29, 2010 at 6:55 AM
Very beautiful with a chuckle in the end,haha,lovely!C
La France Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 6:53 AM
I love horses, also, and your poem is just beautiful, best of luck in the contest.. love Constance
Knop Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 4:18 AM
Hi Tirzah, lovely tribute to horses! Wish you best of luck for the contest and thank you for commenting "When Night Falls"...:)..Gert
Mitchell Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 4:12 AM
Ha! Funny ending:) ...Very well done!
Mehta Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 3:08 AM
A wonderful entry to Is she the one. Good luck
Sweetheart Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 8:44 PM
Lovely Tirzah..good luck in the contest.. for Tavares.. is this a couplet only choice? cause my entry "The Secret Quest" is not... let me know OK? with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..
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