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Is She the One...

As I watch her rhythmic movements, her beauty entrances me, Never have I seen such magnificence, she’s as perfect as she can be; When I saw her for the first time, she stopped me in my tracks, And in her exquisitely flawless nature, I can see nothing that she lacks; I have looked her up and down, she is irresistible in my eyes, For all the other hopefuls out there, it’s time to say your goodbyes; Her faultlessly cadenced beat, sends shivers up my spine, And I can hardly wait for the day, when I can call her mine; Is she the one for me, I know she is without a doubt, And spending my time with her is what my life is all about; She is charming and bewitching in every single way, Her skin tone is amazing, the perfect dappled gray; That’s right my perfect love is an Andalusian Mare, And her everlasting beauty is beyond all compare!

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Date: 6/29/2010 8:06:00 AM
wow! Tirzah, this is captavating, enjoyed your poem... have a nice one ,,..Sidney LeeAnn
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Date: 6/29/2010 6:55:00 AM
Very beautiful with a chuckle in the end,haha,lovely!C
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Date: 6/29/2010 6:53:00 AM
I love horses, also, and your poem is just beautiful, best of luck in the contest.. love Constance
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Date: 6/29/2010 4:18:00 AM
Hi Tirzah, lovely tribute to horses! Wish you best of luck for the contest and thank you for commenting "When Night Falls"...:)..Gert
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Date: 6/29/2010 4:12:00 AM
Ha! Funny ending:) ...Very well done!
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Date: 6/29/2010 3:08:00 AM
A wonderful entry to Is she the one. Good luck
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Date: 6/28/2010 8:44:00 PM
Lovely Tirzah..good luck in the contest.. for Tavares.. is this a couplet only choice? cause my entry "The Secret Quest" is not... let me know OK? with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..
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