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Is Love Blind

She laid in bed that night, in thoughts so fond and deep preventing her from sleep; They once made him smile bright: No more now - seems her plight and gloomy thoughts do creep... His words when they met last still echoed in her mind... "Do you think love is blind?" Fake words left her aghast, His love - a thing of past that he left her behind! True love can hurt never Pure love lives forever! Date: 03/10/2021 Submitted for: HexSonnetta Poetry Contest Sponsor: Emile Pinet HexSonnetta Form: Created by Andrea Dietrich. Syllables: Six syllables each line Rhyme Scheme: abbaab/cddccd/ee

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Date: 5/9/2021 12:46:00 PM
Anitha, your poem made me think of this. There is a song I know. It's chorus reads like this...."I don't believe in destiny, or the guiding hand of fate, I don't believe in forever or love as a mystical state, I don't believe in the stars or the planets or angels watching from above, but I believe there's a ghost of a chance we can find someone to love...and make it last.
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Date: 3/23/2021 6:16:00 AM
- We learn the difference between fake love and true love ... no, my friend Ani ... love does not make us blind ... - Best wishes in the contest with this lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/18/2021 3:40:00 PM
Oh, you did my form SO well, Anitha!! It's not an easy form at all and I still have not even tried it for this contest. I better pick up some speed, but tonight I have to sub some Zoom classes and my whole night will be taken up with teaching. Thanks for trying the Hexsonneta. I hope you do well in the contest!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 3/18/2021 11:58:00 PM
Andrea, thank you SO very much, your comment means a lot for me...Yes, I just wanted to try this form and I enjoyed doing it, though keeping it to six syllables was not so easy. Oh, so you are too busy... Take care dear friend... Love and hugs.. ~ Ani
Date: 3/11/2021 10:54:00 AM
Sometimes, yes. Love is blind. But if it isn't then it should become blinds for we all have fault and must forgive.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 3/13/2021 5:28:00 AM
Yes true.. all make mistakes.. Thank you for the comment Victor... God bless.. ~ Ani
Date: 3/11/2021 5:08:00 AM
Great poetry with a beautiful message " pure love lives forever"... Good luck in the contest...
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 3/13/2021 5:27:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Supraja.. Have a blessed day.. Hugs.. ~ Ani
Date: 3/10/2021 11:52:00 AM
Hello Anita Javasankar, I s love blind? I say yes. True love hurts? For some. Pure love does live forever. enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/13/2021 10:36:00 AM
Hello Anita,I hope all is well with you. You are welcome my friend.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 3/13/2021 5:26:00 AM
Yes, right dear Darlene.. Thank you.. You too enjoy your day..Hugs.. ~ Ani
Date: 3/10/2021 11:18:00 AM
I agree. Lust on the other hand can prove to be a counterfeit love. This is a well expressed poem. Hugs Rick.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 3/13/2021 5:25:00 AM
Yes, true Richard.. Thank you so much for the visit and comment.. God bless.. ~ Ani
Date: 3/10/2021 10:59:00 AM
Very well done, true to form. Good luck in Emile's Contest!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 3/13/2021 5:24:00 AM
Caren, thank you so much for the visit and comment. Hugs.. ~ Ani
Date: 3/10/2021 10:29:00 AM
So true Anitha, true love is everlasting. Best of luck in the contest Hope you are well. Tom
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 3/13/2021 5:23:00 AM
Tom, thank you so much for the visit and comment. God bless. Have a great day.. ~ Ani

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