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Is It Wise

Is it wise to be so open? I mean, a poet, if true to his paper and ink, is there for all to read; My cover well tattered… lots of greasy finger-marks and coffee-stains – some blood – those nasty paper- cuts; but what life worth a chronicle if all blossomy, well pruned; reflections sparkling in a fancy beveled mirror, free from the many shards that bleed great works into print? We are a strange lot; in that our questions go far deeper than any face, covering far more ground than any expression would indicate – I heard somewhere, maybe I said it, that love is not where you find it as much as where it is taken; I think more, that, we bring our hearts to every breakfast...and the dinners, though few and far between, are banquets even gods and goddesses, manipulators of of us sensitive, perhaps very flawed creatures, will eternally envy….

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Date: 8/19/2020 1:15:00 PM
Wonderful, Joe, I heard this about love. Those who go looking for love wO L not find it. If you com from the space of love~ it finds you. I am just a human, no seer, and no Philoopher. Pangie xx Pangiexx
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Joe Dimino
Date: 8/21/2020 10:32:00 AM
:) Seers and philosophers don't need outside love -- they have their own relationship to comfort them. Everyone else is blessed with a need for other human companionship. It is the law of attraction: if one makes themselves available, reachable, what you put out (hold in your heart) will be come back to you. Blessings my friend! xx
Date: 7/29/2020 1:32:00 PM
It truly wise to be open. This is a pretty piece. We poets open up through our words, our imaginations. It's how we craft our beautiful lives. Best regards. Phred
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/30/2020 5:41:00 AM
Hi Phred; for sure, my friend. Honesty, openness must be a part of one's poetry. A reader is immediately turned off by pretentious, ego filled overly wordy works.
Date: 7/27/2020 7:35:00 AM
Yes, I believe it is wise. Poets give others the courage to express their own emotions or at the very least, let them know they are not alone in their experience.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/27/2020 9:50:00 AM
You sound very wise indeed; thank you Richard. Have a great day!

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