Is It True

Spots of ire desire near the fire Images in me are unknown truths Russell Sivey

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2011 8:31:00 PM

Unknown truths, hmmmm. You sound mysterious!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/12/2011 7:36:00 PM

Bubbling with anger while soaking up the flames of the fire, eh? You lead my mind in so many interesting directions, Russell....almost like a cliffhanger. Hope all is well on this chilly autumn night. Gwendolen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/11/2011 4:00:00 PM

Interesting Crystalline..Spots of anger desire near the fire..I wonder if someone got thrown into that fire...Thought provoking..Thanks for stopping by and reading about the vultures..I have written several ones about Buzzards..That is what we call them around here..Sara

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 11/11/2011 3:55:00 PM

This is paints a cool picture with little words.

Jack Horne

Date: 11/11/2011 1:32:00 PM

This is certainly a thought provoking piece, my friend, as Carolyn says. I suppose it's like the ink spot tests that psychiatrists appareantly did many years ago.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/11/2011 11:59:00 AM

Very thought-provoking, Russell. Gazing at the fireplace can produce some deep, introspective thoughts. Well expressed! Love, Carolyn