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Irish Illusion

Leprechaun? ... Deep in the forest, near the old Castle Clare There rose such a chorus, of insect delight With frogs croaking alto, and crickets, in pairs Soothing my ears in the cool midnight air From the slate cottage steps, I would sit to reflect how the world was so vast, and me a mere speck As I searched through the dark, on the ways of the world I could hear something rustle, and the shrubs were disturbed From out of shadows, with a shoemaker's guile Conceited, and not the faintest of smiles A figure, quite dapper, wearing a coat of bright green He vanishes, quickly, back over the stile So quickly it happened, a flash before eyes With cunning in mind, he chanced to reveal So startled, I was, with a shock of surprise That even the frogs, and crickets had stilled Then fled to the hallow, to a bright golden kettle Enticing me then, to follow him there Was it figment? Imagination? I question my mettle With goose-bumps, I'm covered, with fast rising hairs! Out in the forest, the crickets in chorus Return to their singing, but humming quite cautious The frogs barely croaking, Each croak seems evoking the same trepidation, and adds more suspicion Perchance this encounter, was pure superstition ... Will he wander back, will I be redeemed? .....or Perchance, I dozed off. Was it only a dream? …..
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/12/2017 11:49:00 AM
Loved it, congrats
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Date: 3/11/2017 9:13:00 PM
Wonderful fable, Carrie, congratulations on your win ~* Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/19/2014 1:56:00 PM
I believe it, Carrie. Being half Irish, how could I not. Ah, but the pot of Gold is not as elusive as we think. I believe this poem may have spilled over the top. I enjoyed this one..... Robert.
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Date: 4/1/2014 5:16:00 PM
superb Carrie congrats on win hugs
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Date: 3/30/2014 2:25:00 AM
wd Carrie, was a great read ....Seren
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Date: 3/29/2014 9:35:00 AM
Truly adorable, Carrie. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/29/2014 8:13:00 AM
I' love to find a leprechaun, or better yet catch one! But alas, that would mean rainbows, and it hasn't raindrop here in so long. Fun to read! RAY
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Date: 3/29/2014 7:13:00 AM
Now if this is read with a bit of the lilt of an Irish brogue... Nicely done...and now for a bowl of Lucky Charms
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Date: 3/29/2014 5:48:00 AM
Enjoyable and creative write, congrats on the fine win, carrie
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Date: 3/28/2014 10:04:00 PM
Congrats on your win Carrie, Thanks for entering my contest......Hugs......Roger
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Date: 3/28/2014 10:04:00 PM
Perchance to dream...... I love how this sounded like twas the night before Xmas. GREAT win. Congratulations.
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Date: 3/28/2014 9:52:00 PM
Congratulations on this first place win... Well done Carrie! Verlena
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Date: 10/29/2011 3:13:00 PM
Well done Carrie. Tony
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Date: 10/27/2011 4:38:00 PM
Perchance it was, but how exciting. Congratulations, Carrie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/27/2011 1:25:00 PM
Nice limerick that brings the leprechaun to life.
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Date: 10/27/2011 10:25:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your HM in the contest luv..
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Date: 10/27/2011 8:48:00 AM
Congrats Carrie, Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/27/2011 5:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Creepy Irish Creatures" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/15/2011 4:34:00 PM
cough..cough...you going to fix this one missy?? ;) Soup Mail
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Date: 10/10/2011 4:02:00 PM
ohhhhhhh yikers 8/6/8/6 oh silly one!!! too many silly bullies per line here!
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