Irish Farewell

O'Rourke has left Ireland with all he owns in a knapsack.
He is going to America with sunshine at his back.
The Irish soil is dotted with potatoes now turned black.
O'Rourke has left Ireland and he is never coming back.

Amongst the rotting potatoes, a seed has begun to sprout.
On the stem shall a four leaf clover grow, surely there's no doubt.
Soon the rot will disappear. Ireland's luck will turn about.
But O'Rourke is gone for good. Raise a mug and give a shout.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Slaughter Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 10:35 AM
A very poignant piece, Hilda. That must have been a really tough time for those folks. And even though O'Rourke may be gone "for good", I'll bet he still raises a mug and gives a shout every St. Pat's Day.
Greenhough Avatar
September 21, 2024 at 12:03 PM
Thank you for commenting. I can feel the Irish pain that those hard years caused.
Buehler Avatar
June 9, 2024 at 5:42 PM
Hilda this is a poignant, wonderfully written tale from one of the saddest chapters in Irish history. A touchng poem.
Greenhough Avatar
June 9, 2024 at 6:57 PM
It is sad. I heard of the potato famine and hardship in Ireland when I was in elementary school. Almost all of my teachers were women of Irish blood. I learned a lot about Ireland. I am pleased that you like my version.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 2, 2024 at 12:32 PM
A great Irish farewell and the luck of the Irish ahead…
Greenhough Avatar
June 9, 2024 at 6:53 PM
This poem was written for St. Patrick's Day. I attempted a four leaf clover poem, but it took a turn. Thanks for reading.
Delaney Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 7:11 AM
You have captured the optomistic spirit of Ireland with this amazing poem, Hilda I think maybe you could say indomitable spirits, I do have Irish blood from Irish convicts transported to Tasmania. I enjoyed reading this and thank you. SuZ
Greenhough Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 8:19 PM
Thank you for your comments. I didn't hear about the Irish in Tasmania. It must have been hard to adapt to a wilderness place.
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 12:18 PM
- St. Patrick's Day ... I don't know much about it ... but, written with humor ... and I smile :) - hugs
Greenhough Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 2:22 PM
Thank you.
DiMino Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 10:58 AM
love it!
Greenhough Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 2:22 PM
Thank you.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 2:27 AM
You will find plenty of St. Patrick's in America. A popular saint. Many have migrated from Ireland to America. Lovely poem.
Greenhough Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 6:58 AM
Yes, you're right. Thank you.
Nicholsen Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 11:37 AM
Lovely Celtic write adored reading your work sweetie.
Greenhough Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 8:59 PM
Thank you.
Empress Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 8:00 AM
I love your rhymes dear hilda. So many migrate sadly, to find better lives, leaving their ancestral soil. Youv written so well and your title made me think of a movie that just came out on netflix, irish wish. Fun movie. I felt so much reading your poem. You always write on so many different subjects and themes, and they are always so impressive and worthy of all the accolades, pleasure reading your work again dear hilda. Sending you light always
Greenhough Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 10:48 AM
Thank you. This is my St. Patrick's Day poem. Sadly I was unable to squeeze "green" into it.
Rose  Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 3:48 AM
hmmmm, everyone has migrated at one point or the other, your poetry is most endearing, I just finished singing forty shades of green, lol, Ireland the beautiful tatter or not, loved it Hilda, :)
Greenhough Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 7:04 AM
hmm. I'm not certain coming to America in the cargo hold would be purposeful migration, but it is expected that people come to work and improve their and our lives today. Let's keep very bad people out. O'Rourke was a good person and left out of desperation. So today, Happy St. Patrick's Day.
Wolf Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 7:39 PM
I love the lilt, the rhyme, and the message in this, Hilda. And just think: If O'Rourke is in Chicago tomorrow, he can see the Chicago River dyed deep green, and a grand parade down Michigan Ave. How about those potatoes?! Enjoy, Gershon
Greenhough Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 8:01 PM
He may be in the parade. By now, I hope he owns an Irish pub. Thanks for liking my poem.
Rodgers Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 6:44 PM
Dear Hilda, A marvelous tribute to the resilience of the human spirit amidst hardship and departure. Your words are filled with a sense of bittersweet nostalgia, capturing the essence of hope and renewal even in the face of adversity. I love how your poem tells us to embrace change with courage and optimism. Hilda, this is such a touching and evocative verse. - Blessings, Daniel
Greenhough Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 6:56 PM
Thank you.
Fisher Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 4:30 PM
Raising a mug to O'Rourke! You do the Irish proud with your poem.
Greenhough Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 4:59 PM
Thank you. It's intended for St. Patrick's Day. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Baker Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 3:30 PM
Here, here! to O'Rouke. It's people like him that came to America and became the beginning of my ancestry. I'm mostly Irish / Scottish. :-) with a touch of Iberian Peninsula. lol According to Ancestery, com. Thanks for the fun read, Hilda. Smiles and blessings Bill
Greenhough Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 4:57 PM
I also checked my ancestry. I have many countries in my background with a few additional races. I love America. I wish all Americans would.
Jones Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 2:44 PM
Fun and engaging I was hooked and want to know more about him after he got to America!
Jones Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 11:23 PM
Most do love America and what she represents a new start for some. But not all.
Greenhough Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 4:54 PM
It's pretty certain he had to start at the bottom and work his way up. There are thousands of stories of Irishmen and the lives they led. Some became great Americans, some became gangsters. Hopefully, they love America.
M  Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 2:16 PM
Love it Hilda!! Fun ,great rhyming and a real catchiness to it! Debx
Greenhough Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 2:28 PM
Thank you. Happy St. Patrick's Day to you.
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