Iris Awkes

Scent of lilies fills the room- all our senses bloom

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Sharon Winter

Date: 2/22/2009 4:39:00 AM

It is difficult not to actually breathe in the gorgeous scent. Too beautiful as you make my senses bloom. The title is awesome by the way - of course. Wonderful to read you again. Love, Shar

Robin L. Gass

Date: 2/21/2009 4:31:00 PM

Beautiful poetry, Brian. The image you have created is scented sweet! Excellent work! Love, Robin

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/21/2009 3:38:00 PM

Wonderful...I can smell the lilies. BG

Cecil Hickman

Date: 2/21/2009 2:55:00 PM

a scented piece that fills the mind of spring along with its beauty,,truly a treasure,,Thank you for leaving your words upon my writings,,blessings..Cecil

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/21/2009 9:26:00 AM

Brian, this work makes me long for spring even more! Lovely, dear. And thanks for reading "Blizzard." My friend Barbara was so pleased when she read the poem. She truly is the most compassionate, spiritual person I have been blessed to know. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/21/2009 8:21:00 AM

I am breathing in the sweet sent!! Love this! ~Carrie

Marie Prance

Date: 2/21/2009 8:05:00 AM

This makes me want to rush spring,God Bless,Marie

John Rhinem

Date: 2/21/2009 7:12:00 AM

Yes, the alluring essence of true beauty I would say...."Hello Gifted & Blessed Brian Strand & All Your Loves!!!"~What a truly gentle and lovely write here dear Brother~So very very pretty!!! I can see that "Your Heart & Soul Are Over-Flowing With 'Love!!!'"~Smile~How wonderful that is!!!~"Blessings & Warmth To You & Yours Always, John!":)