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I love the ocean!

Feeling the sand through my toes My hair is damp,my body glows My face is flushed with seaside air I am delighted to be here I gaze along looking for shells as I descend down to the waters swells I try to not feel the cold water on my feet My body's cold but my spirit's warm My hair is damp,my body glows This is a high that will never be beat the waves are rough as my anticipation grows I feel the waves wash over me My body's numb, my mind at peace My head is clear, my body beat My hair is damp, my body glows This is a thrill I must repeat

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Date: 8/12/2018 7:16:00 PM
Fantastic imagery, Tania , congratulations on an excellent win! Hugs Eve
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/12/2018 8:09:00 PM
Thank you Eve!
Date: 8/12/2018 12:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win. That's where I want to be.... sounds so good with this heat wave here. :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/12/2018 4:09:00 AM
thank you Susan!
Date: 8/11/2018 8:51:00 AM
Congrats on your gold medal win with this refreshing and lovely poem, Tania.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/11/2018 11:08:00 AM
thank you!

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