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I left the village and trudged towards the small wood, Junipers, covered with berries that looked so good. It was an inviting place many knew about It was luck I found it, few cared I have no doubt. In the middle, a pond cherished by lots of fish, Around willow Norway Spruce which was my true wish. And on the face of the water, large leaves floated, With white, yellow and purple lotus promoted. I sat on a rock, watching some birds as they flew, Elated as the solitude around me grew. On the other side, a small bridge led to my place. I had to admire her neat walk, her lovely face. She quietly sat down beside me, full of bliss. I leaned slowly towards her and gave her a kiss. In that inviting place who could ignore delight I was ready to give her my all heart outright In that silence, she lay on my shoulder, her head. In blissful solitude, never a word we said. 1 March 2023 Place 1 Writing Challenge - I Words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 4/3/2023 4:27:00 PM
Victor, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! Love the image !
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Date: 3/12/2023 4:51:00 AM
A beautiful poem Victor. So deserving of your winning place.
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Date: 3/3/2023 7:37:00 PM
You have immortalised a lovely moment. Congratulations dear Victor on your first place win.
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Date: 3/3/2023 7:03:00 PM
Great romantic cum love experience with Nature as the background and witness. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/3/2023 6:07:00 PM
That’s so lovely and romantic Victor, the poem flows well and the words are captivating, the picture is beautiful too. Congratulations on your success in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Date: 3/3/2023 5:48:00 PM
An amazing write, Victor the romantic! Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 3/2/2023 9:19:00 PM
Oh I bet this gets a first place. It's so awesome.
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Date: 3/2/2023 7:56:00 PM
So beautiful, your heart is always embracing such sweet visions of love.
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Date: 3/2/2023 9:08:00 AM
Your love of nature drives you into the mind of love! Very nice, my friend!
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Date: 3/1/2023 8:47:00 PM
Oh my, what a beautiful moment. A moment like that is unforgettable. Truly beautiful, Vic. I very much enjoyed it :)
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Date: 3/1/2023 7:11:00 PM
Cool and romantic, Victor:)
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Date: 3/1/2023 6:48:00 PM
Lovely poem and a reminder that at any age love resides
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Date: 3/1/2023 6:38:00 PM
Sometimes silence speaks louder than words. It's always nice in the second part of your poems when she appears. B0l in the contest Victor!
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Date: 3/1/2023 1:26:00 PM
Proficiently scribed, Victor. Who says we get too old for romance? Good luck!
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Date: 3/1/2023 11:10:00 AM
Perfect moments of lovers' bliss in a beautiful, natural setting, are portrayed in this romantic tale. Very nice!
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Date: 3/1/2023 8:37:00 AM
I always love walking beside you watching the scenery. Very romantic,good luck.
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Date: 3/1/2023 7:58:00 AM
soup mail. Sara
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Date: 3/1/2023 7:57:00 AM
Victor, limitless splendor is pouring down from the heavens. Your poetry exudes an inexhaustible elegance, which is enfolded in romance. Your take on the contest is clever. Good luck dear friend, May God bless you!
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Date: 3/1/2023 6:54:00 AM
You painted a very beautiful place for a sweet and romantic date with your creative words my dear friend Victor. I enjoyed your stellar poem this evening. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writngs. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs
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Date: 3/1/2023 6:10:00 AM
Beautiful, romantic--Much enjoyed your depiction, Victor, with all the images you paint throughout.
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Date: 3/1/2023 5:56:00 AM
Perfect setting for a romantic meeting Victor Tom
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Date: 3/1/2023 4:52:00 AM
Ahh~~ Romantic work in this one. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Good way to start the day. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 3/1/2023 4:32:00 AM
When love fills the heart, words become superfluous ! Lovely poem with a lovely setting....! All the best in the contest dear Victor
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Date: 3/1/2023 2:22:00 AM
Victor Victor. Hello. Need you say more. I think not. You draw us all in this most enchanting and special scene and moment with your words and execution. This is so extremely beautiful. Truly. Thank you for always sharing your poetic talent with us. This was a great way to start the day. May today bring on everything good. Love and Blessings now and always. (smile) PS - this is an entry to be read out loud with feeling.
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Date: 3/1/2023 1:29:00 AM
- In such a beautiful place we need no words ... just enjoy the idyll and the closeness of each other ... a wonderful poem, Victor - Best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely new month :) - hugs
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