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Inviting

I left the village and trudged towards the small wood,
Junipers, covered with berries that looked so good.
It was an inviting place many knew about
It was luck I found it, few cared I have no doubt.
In the middle, a pond cherished by lots of fish,
Around willow Norway Spruce which was my true wish.

And on the face of the water, large leaves floated,
With white, yellow and purple lotus promoted.
I sat on a rock, watching some birds as they flew,
Elated as the solitude around me grew.

On the other side, a small bridge led to my place.
I had to admire her neat walk, her lovely face.
She quietly sat down beside me, full of bliss.
I leaned slowly towards her and gave her a kiss.
In that inviting place who could ignore delight
I was ready to give her my all heart outright

In that silence, she lay on my shoulder, her head.
In blissful solitude, never a word we said.

1 March 2023

Place 1

Writing Challenge - I Words - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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La France Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 4:27 PM
Victor, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! Love the image !
Volumes Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 4:51 AM
A beautiful poem Victor. So deserving of your winning place.
George Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 7:37 PM
You have immortalised a lovely moment. Congratulations dear Victor on your first place win.
Alex Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 7:03 PM
Great romantic cum love experience with Nature as the background and witness. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Edmonds  Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 6:07 PM
That’s so lovely and romantic Victor, the poem flows well and the words are captivating, the picture is beautiful too. Congratulations on your success in Constance’s contest… Belle
Seeker Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 5:48 PM
An amazing write, Victor the romantic! Congratulations on your top win!
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 9:19 PM
Oh I bet this gets a first place. It's so awesome.
Legros Kelley Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 7:56 PM
So beautiful, your heart is always embracing such sweet visions of love.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 9:08 AM
Your love of nature drives you into the mind of love! Very nice, my friend!
Chuuk Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 8:47 PM
Oh my, what a beautiful moment. A moment like that is unforgettable. Truly beautiful, Vic. I very much enjoyed it :)
Daniel Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 7:11 PM
Cool and romantic, Victor:)
Milgate Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 6:48 PM
Lovely poem and a reminder that at any age love resides
Anaya Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 6:38 PM
Sometimes silence speaks louder than words. It's always nice in the second part of your poems when she appears. B0l in the contest Victor!
Turner Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 1:26 PM
Proficiently scribed, Victor. Who says we get too old for romance? Good luck!
Buehler Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 11:10 AM
Perfect moments of lovers' bliss in a beautiful, natural setting, are portrayed in this romantic tale. Very nice!
Roper Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 8:37 AM
I always love walking beside you watching the scenery. Very romantic,good luck.
Kendrick Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 7:58 AM
soup mail. Sara
Poet Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 7:57 AM
Victor, limitless splendor is pouring down from the heavens. Your poetry exudes an inexhaustible elegance, which is enfolded in romance. Your take on the contest is clever. Good luck dear friend, May God bless you!
Gasun Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 6:54 AM
You painted a very beautiful place for a sweet and romantic date with your creative words my dear friend Victor. I enjoyed your stellar poem this evening. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writngs. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs
Pandit Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 6:10 AM
Beautiful, romantic--Much enjoyed your depiction, Victor, with all the images you paint throughout.
Cunningham Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 5:56 AM
Perfect setting for a romantic meeting Victor Tom
Kendrick Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 4:52 AM
Ahh~~ Romantic work in this one. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Good way to start the day. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
George Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 4:32 AM
When love fills the heart, words become superfluous ! Lovely poem with a lovely setting....! All the best in the contest dear Victor
Ricci Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 2:22 AM
Victor Victor. Hello. Need you say more. I think not. You draw us all in this most enchanting and special scene and moment with your words and execution. This is so extremely beautiful. Truly. Thank you for always sharing your poetic talent with us. This was a great way to start the day. May today bring on everything good. Love and Blessings now and always. (smile) PS - this is an entry to be read out loud with feeling.
Andresen Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 1:29 AM
- In such a beautiful place we need no words ... just enjoy the idyll and the closeness of each other ... a wonderful poem, Victor - Best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely new month :) - hugs
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