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Invisible Tears

Invisible tears spring from my wounded heart All senses on alert as soul cries out, still And out of its windows, overflowing A river, crystal clear, glistening ~*~

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Joshua Harris

Date: 11/17/2010 9:16:00 AM

great images you have given. great write

Duncan Chappell

Date: 10/5/2010 5:14:00 PM

excellent read thank you [duncan]

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/4/2010 8:34:00 PM

very profound poem here. just love it. Harry

Kevin Semeniuk

Date: 10/4/2010 8:23:00 PM

such a precious picture you have painted in words! love it!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/4/2010 1:27:00 PM

this sure comes across as very vivid for me, Audrey, despite the tears being invisible--thanks for all your comments! enjoy your day! -- nikko :)

Ralph Taylor

Date: 10/4/2010 10:49:00 AM

Sad, but nicely written, Audrey. Have a great week. Thanks for your kind words. xxxRalph

Rinki Nandy

Date: 10/4/2010 10:17:00 AM

This is a b'fully sad write. Thanks for welcoming me.....sky... you have mispelled my name, it's Rinki Nandy not Randy. I do read and comment on poems but am still relatively new to the site. Regards..Rinki.

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 10/3/2010 2:21:00 PM

Heartbreaking,hugs dear friend

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/3/2010 11:06:00 AM

From your tears. The promise of a new day and new beginnings dawn. Beautiful write Audrey, love Wilma

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/3/2010 10:57:00 AM

Hi Audrey, this is a great and well penned and profound poem. Enjoyed the read this evening! And thank you for your kind comments! Love, Gert

John Rhinem

Date: 10/3/2010 8:51:00 AM

Smile ~ Two souls amid the crystals waters unto, a forevers admiration & the purest of the purest of, "Beautiful Love" ~*~ "Astonishingly Soft Pastels This Portrait; Magically Bittersweet & Beautiful; 'Beautiful Like You!!!'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have The Most 'Blessed & Beautiful' of Days 'Dear, Beautiful Audrey Carey,' Through The Looking Glass of Ever So Lovelies, 'Beautiful Love;'" Bye, "Dear 'Beautiful Audrey!'":) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 10/3/2010 8:43:00 AM

Smile ~ "You Are 'Sooo Beautiful, 'Dear Beautiful Audrey Carey!!!'" ~ Did I ever tell "Your Beauty" this? I believe that I have &, I know that I shall, until the ends of time ~ I just left one souls beautiful reflection but, to find yet another ~ Allow myself to gently take hold of "Your Beauty" now &, to lovingly place "Your Treasures" into the ocean of my own soul my dear; that "You" may swim with me & I with "You," unto the horizon of Always to be ~ ....Cont:)

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/3/2010 8:22:00 AM

beautiful poem