Invisible Prison

Invisible Prison

I look at the wall
	I look at the floor
I look out the window
	I look at the door
No clock on the wall
	No light in the socket
Empty bottles and empty wallet
	Bars in my mind
I am tied to chair
	Longing freedom of the fresh air
Ropes hold me tight	
	Hopes have dulled my escaping knife
Empty room
	Empty soul
I look at the floor
	I look at the wall
I look at the door
	I look out the window
The ceiling is falling
	Fans twirling in my head
I stumble and fall
	Through it all
Mirrors in turmoil
	Dance in the mind
Death's sardonic laughter
	Wishes granted by the latter
Month’s later authorities will demand
	What the hell is the matter?
Red words, all a splatter
	Stoic I sit, nothing to shatter







Police Report

One	No sign of any struggle
Two	Almost looks like he froze to death
One	Door wasn’t even locked
One	No food in the fridge
Two	Odd hardly any furniture
One	Will need a tox screen to make sure
One	Looks like he just sat there and died
Two	How long you figure he was like that?	
One	Month or more, maybe even two, allot of decomposition
Two	Who called it in?
One	Neighbor, said his car had a flat tire in his driveway
One	and wasn’t moved in weeks
Two	Hey take a look at this!
One 	what you got?
Two	The freezer, full of Cash and gold
One	I'd be damned, no food and all that doe
Two	Almost feels like he was in a prison
One	Who knows? The coroner is here
Two	Ya, guess we done here, lab will do the rest
One	Lets go grab a coffee



Some people have convictions, some people have two!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 4/29/2016 10:50:00 PM
YOUR ABILITY TO BRING THE READER IN, EVOKE A VIVID AND STRONG RESPONSE IS MASSIVE. Deep and the message sent is very, very strong. YOUR EVERY POEM DELIVERS, AND DOES SO IN SPADES..
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Date: 4/29/2016 5:33:00 PM
I swear I could have wrote this, we are too much in mental mind meld, lol. hugs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/29/2016 7:07:00 PM
When I hear that Cas, its a high compliment indeed! Thank you so much Hugs
Date: 4/29/2016 8:27:00 AM
There must be another part to this. I can sense a poem.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/29/2016 2:59:00 PM
Thanks Tim
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/29/2016 12:29:00 PM
Oh I see the first now....amazing and a fave
Date: 4/29/2016 3:17:00 AM
Found it a heartbreaking write in so so many ways - sometimes it's only when there is an infestation of flies and maggots is a body found -post piling up, no sing of someone for weeks yet nothing is done- what an uncaring society we live in.... if I don'e see someone around in soup I often drop a soup mail to them - more often than not they respond:-) hugs jan xx 7
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/29/2016 2:58:00 PM
That was the report of the poem! :) The poem is there now!
Date: 4/28/2016 11:51:00 PM
Oh my, Oh yes - you said 'ironic' and I say, yes, but no coincidence. Please read my response to you. The drama and sadness in your write pertains to this day and age in so many ways. It also pertains to personal thought ramblings I have had about this. I am delighted in a relieved way to find that someone wrote this unsettling reality down. A great job, like the fly on the wall in a lonely one's home. Many a maintenance man has stumbled on to such as this. An excellent, dramatic piece! CayCay
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/29/2016 2:57:00 PM
That wasn't the poem, but the poem is there now!!! :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/29/2016 3:15:00 AM
would be more than one fly on the wall if he'd been dead for some months CayCay:-( hugs jan xx
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