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We're human beings- masters of this world; what great accomplishments we have unfurled! Between each other, we have kept our peace most of the time- this virtue, we release. And yet, so capable of causing death- annihilating heartbeats, precious breath, with wars and crimes that take away our lives by enemies, we see- with guns or knives. But now, we stand and face this enemy we cannot see, yet- the epitome of any threat, we've had to face before- Coronavirus- microscopic spore- to now advance by touch and through our air; the sight of it, we're surely unaware. With fright, we hide away in our cocoons of living space- negating all communes. We're human beings- masters of this earth, at war with unseen enemies- our dearth, advanced from microscopic netherworld- true masters now of our evolved dream-world. And yet- somehow, we know that we will win and triumph over bad times- where we've been, as future days will show new graphs unfurled- and claim we're safe- still masters of this world! March 19, 2020 Contest: N-A Re-Run 8 Poetry Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton Received N/A Premiere Contest: Coronavirus Covid-19 Judged:05/12/2020

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Date: 6/17/2020 10:29:00 AM
Nice write Sandra, congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 3/20/2020 9:05:00 AM
An interesting and I think, positive take on the current crisis, with a wide view, and perhaps a touch of irony. Nice one, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/20/2020 3:24:00 PM
Thanks so much for your supportive comment, Geoffrey. Much appreciated. Stay safe. Sandra

Book: Shattered Sighs