Invisible

Invisible by Amy Swanson All her life, she tried to stay where no one else could see. It's part of being invisible. When much has happened in your life You become afraid. Afraid to live... afraid to love... Best to stay where no else can hurt your heart. Live life from a distance try to hide your heart Never let them know just how vulnerable you are. For if they do... they may use it against you. I know. Put on a smile... dream your dreams... but keep a little part invisible.

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Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 3/13/2009 12:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week. GB Tyesha

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/11/2009 3:03:00 PM

Amy, congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 3/11/2009 1:51:00 PM

This was sweet and a little melancholy. Congratulations Amy on having "Invisible" featured. Vince

Ashley Abel

Date: 3/10/2009 7:21:00 PM

Gratz on the feature. I really like this and understand it. Ashley

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 3/10/2009 3:12:00 PM

I enjoyed this one a lot! congrats on your well deserved feature...MJ*

Daver Austin

Date: 3/10/2009 10:15:00 AM

Good advice, Amy. I, for one, am a hide-away, love to be by myself where no one can shred my confidence. I won't apologize, this from first hand experience. Good write. Love, daver

Sue Mason

Date: 3/9/2009 4:30:00 PM

Excellent philosophy to live by here, Amy ... at least its worked for me for a long, long time. I've always known there was a part of me that belonged with Great Spirit and nowhere else ... smile ... very good choice to be featured this week at the Soup! Congratulations

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/9/2009 1:57:00 PM

I can so well relate to these heartfelt words you have written. Congatulations on this very touching write being featured this week! Love, Robin

John Heck

Date: 3/9/2009 11:11:00 AM

Amy - Congratulations on your poem being featured this week! Very well deserved. Peace always, John

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/9/2009 6:26:00 AM

Warmest congrats Amy on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar

Brian Strand

Date: 3/9/2009 12:59:00 AM

Congrats on your feature this week Amy.Rgds Brian

Michael Jordan

Date: 3/8/2009 7:50:00 PM

Amy Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ

Date: 3/8/2009 6:24:00 PM

It's sad to see people stand on the sidelines in life instead of living it. I like the format of this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Belinda Parish

Date: 2/8/2009 10:00:00 AM

I know t his feeling all to well. Good write Amy. I love your poems. Thanks for the comments on mine. Take care and God Bless

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/2/2008 5:52:00 AM

Ah! ...you've just described my life, or some of it! Fear is at the bottom, I guess. Once you shed you fears your confidence will flourish... Well done Amy! Best wishes, Keith

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 11/25/2008 6:14:00 PM

I work with kids who hurt inside. This says a lot. The vulnerability came from having screwed up adults in their lives. I likked the poem. Vince

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/24/2008 4:38:00 PM

It does seem we need to protect ourselves from the cold, cruel world. Good idea and wonderful poetry. Love, Shar

Michaela Payne

Date: 11/24/2008 2:21:00 PM

I can so relate to this it's crazy, I loved every word, because every word is true to what I would do, and still sometimes do. This was a great write I liked it a lot, thanks for reading my poem, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Stay blessed, your friend ~Michaela~