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Invictus By William Ernest Henley

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I am the master of my fate, I am the captain of my soul, Shackled and bound naught pensive mood, Errant thy mind unique ahold, Gift naught against thy solitude, Further addressed words oft betold, Thine wounds convey said blood doth shed, Thine consequence freedom commit, Inscribed in blood their conceits fed, Thy testament thee naught submit, Thy body broke thy skin be bruised, Thy dogs licked wounds thy name tainted, Yet, albeit, chose naught be used, Nor to be manipulated, Annals of time should fortune find, Sorted soul of true conviction, Should paths be crossed be thee unkind, Thank the gods thy valediction. 2020 February 02 Howmanysyllables; 18 lines x 8 syllables per = 144 syllables total

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Date: 2/10/2020 3:49:00 PM
Love this great poem.. Wondrously conceived and executed. Congratulations on your win. God bless..
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Hilo Poet
Date: 2/10/2020 4:44:00 PM
Thank you, kindly Robert, for your immeasurable gracious nature -- Aloha!~@wk
Date: 2/9/2020 2:57:00 PM
Ahhh, a work of art from you William! Congratulations on your deserving Second Place win my friend! Aloha, Connie xxoo
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Hilo Poet
Date: 2/9/2020 3:15:00 PM
First-round I wrote Free Verse, this round I wrote as the master penned, 8-syllables, --I am resigned to my fate, -- "Trees", by Joyce Kilmer, I wrote similarly~@wk
Date: 2/9/2020 11:48:00 AM
great content and form, the line inspired your muse wonderfully... congratulations on your win... hugs
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Hilo Poet
Date: 2/9/2020 12:01:00 PM
Loved your Free Verse of the same choice, it was a betterment writing style than my prosaic write!~@wk
Date: 2/9/2020 8:51:00 AM
- A great and inspirational poem, congratulations William :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Hilo Poet
Date: 2/9/2020 9:02:00 AM
Eh! thanks~@wk
Date: 2/9/2020 6:30:00 AM
You did the well with the restrictions you put upon yourself.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Hilo Poet
Date: 2/9/2020 9:00:00 AM
Just kept to thine master's penned, perchance I break form liken et al.~@wk

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