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Invaluable Recollections

recall first school day
I stood weeping, scared to move
we held hands at five
she vowed to look after me
we were close, with a deep bond

we had sweet-sad thoughts
dispute with football or dolls
taking both shows care
saddened by her lengthy trip
she cupped my cheeks and we kissed

she flushed when I grinned
felt proud and had butterflies
I soothed her last fall
I hugged her and wiped her tears
we took the shield out chatting

hopes ostracise fears
Brooke faded at age twenty-four
I love her thoughts view
her tomb shares highs and lows
for now, she'll stand as best friend

1st Place Contest Winner

Written: August 10, 2022

Syllables checked by HMS.com
             Inspired by “Childhood Nostalgia” Poetry Contest
                                   Sponsor: JCB Brul

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Valsa George August 31, 2022 at 10:23 PM Congratulations on your well deserved top win, dear friend Lasaad !

Linda Alice Fowler August 31, 2022 at 3:21 PM A sad yet uplifting write Lasaad. I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your win! Linda

Sam Kauffman August 31, 2022 at 12:45 PM Such sadness at losing your best friend so early yet tinged with the comforting blanket of your happy memories from age five! I lost a dear friend about the same age. I still miss her so much! My poem Tribute is about Barbie. Sending you blessings on wings of comfort dear friend! Congratulations on your win!

Christuraj Alex August 31, 2022 at 6:49 AM Wow! In your very style. Congratulations!

Terry Miller August 31, 2022 at 5:59 AM A lovely, touching poem; so glad I stopped by.

Bill Baker August 17, 2022 at 5:10 PM A touching and emotions filled poem, Lasaad. A wonderful memory of childhood friendship and loyalty. I'm glad you had her as your friend, and glad your shared with us through your poetry. Good Luck, and have a great week! Bill

Valsa George August 12, 2022 at 6:08 AM These recollections are joyful and saddening at the same time ! Childhood memories beginning with the first day in school till you became a man are beautifully recorded ! A delightful poem that I enjoyed much !

Sara Kendrick August 11, 2022 at 3:04 AM Wow!! It was good to have such a friend in life. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. It is filled with emotions and nostalgia. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara

Vijay Pandit August 10, 2022 at 3:32 PM Reminiscing in sweet childhood memories, Lasaad. A delightful poem that brings forth scenes of youth to relish as we look back. Best to you for a top win.