Intrusive Thoughts

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06/10/25

Pick up a title. Vol. 52

Contest by Edward Ibeh.

Dark feelings ! Just to say : Intrusive thoughts - Most irritating : Continuous pricking , Who to witness my last breath ? Staying alone in my old age away from children living abroad. I pray to see them beside my death bed. Enjoyed my life : Completed each duty. Raised up children with satisfaction. Bold to be loud as proud mother. But now to meet once a year. What to do ? That's my fate. No options are left. I surrender. " What will be ", will be right.

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