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Intoxicated

intoxicated by entwined souls,
breasts beating, breathing
in the amalgamation of us.
trust in lips, tongues, stress
of otherworldly communication.

neo-occasion of bare skin,
slightly shy, surrendering
to the shift and slide—
sensuality played portentously…
innocence irrigated…
blind.

intoxicated by the itch;
you scratch
my back like a kitten.
my feet and knees
find your warm precipices
of carnal knowledge.
together we learn
there’s an inner universe;
exploration
of mysterious habitation.

in practice, in habit
tingling of dendrites
over and over again.
intoxication’s jealous—
jumps for joy
at your touch…
knows where your headed
north or south…

intoxicated by extremes,
the shudder of sensuality,
shamelessness of dreaming
in your bed, calling only
your name, stamped
with approval— our’s,
story comes to
a climactic conclusion—
Your Welcome.

9/9/2021
“I'' Contest New or Old
Sponsor: Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Edmonds  Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 4:36 PM
Love between lovers perfectly described through your sensational poem Kim, beautifully done… Belle
Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 6:51 PM
Thank you, Belle!
La France Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 5:51 AM
Kim, congratulations on your win in my "I" contest with this wonderful poem, well done, I like the image chosen too ~ love and serenity _Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 7:14 AM
Thank you, Constance! :)
Proxenos Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 6:11 AM
Powerful passion, seduction at its height, , a very pleasurable, richly seductive, well constructed poem. I applaud this write, excellent! This is a definite win! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Rodrigues Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 5:00 AM
Thank you so much, sweet Jennifer!
DiMino Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 9:23 AM
Wow! Sensuous and beautiful all a single pulse. This is outstanding. You get a favorite!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 9:36 AM
Thank you, Joe!
Krutsinger Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 6:15 AM
I am intoxicated by the sensuality of this poem, Kim. Wow! I am at school, no shower in sight.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 9:37 AM
LOL! Thanks, Caren!
Canerdy Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 1:41 PM
Whew! Where is my fan! Kim, this is very descriptive and expressive of passion. Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 2:53 PM
Love that you needed your fan! ~ hugs
Gentile Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 1:13 PM
Passion overflows Kim! Great write, perfect title! Best for the contest!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 2:53 PM
Thank you, Mike!
Kavanagh  Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 12:49 PM
Well done Kim an excellent expression of sensual intoxication, the ending (your welcome) brings empowerment to the woman, yep you kept your head, brilliant cheers David
Rodrigues Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 2:53 PM
Thank you! Love your comment :)
Buehler Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 12:00 PM
Great writing, Kim. A winner for sure! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 2:52 PM
Thank you! ~ hugs
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 11:16 AM
Wow! Kim, Good luck in the contest.Hugs.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 11:48 AM
Hello Kim, You are welcome my friend. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 11:45 AM
Thank you, Darlene
Poet Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 11:13 AM
A very sensual write Kim, you've written a breath-taking poem; your wording Is flawless, and you portray your thoughts with astounding eloquence. Blessings
Rodrigues Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 11:45 AM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Hankins Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 9:19 AM
Wow! Beautifully written with just the right measure of sensuality and passion. Loved it, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 10:17 AM
Thank you, Milton! :)
Cunningham Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 8:57 AM
A very sensual write Kim, best of luck in the contest. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 9:01 AM
Thank you, Tom!
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