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Into Woodland's Arms

As brushstrokes of wood’s tint start to alight I drift through its edge in the gold of night, Vibrant a cape rustling blooms on the hills In a grandeur which mystifies and spills An assemblage of heathers, grass that lay-- Much like jewels under moonshine’s display That fireflies reel as if waking this space Pursuing lost hope , its desired embrace: Here my dream , now lonely , flows out to meet Trances from past autumn’s love quite complete: Beneath wind’s fragrance coasting near the shore, I watch a sketch looming on forest- floor-- My dear man returns on this very spot Enduring tough waves from a mangled yacht... His blink humming about our woodland charms In our grove, we fold upon eager arms. Contest of Silent One: Into the Woods Rhyme form: Couplet 1/09/2019

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Date: 1/19/2019 11:13:00 AM
Back with big congratulations on your win!:). Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/14/2019 6:05:00 PM
I so admire you for your ability to write wondrous lines such as these, and I congratulate you on your win in the contest. Poetry hugs, Gershon
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Date: 1/13/2019 1:38:00 PM
I am so happy to see this lovely poem get a First Placement Nette! Congratulations! : ) xxoo
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Date: 1/13/2019 1:15:00 PM
Well deserving number one spot in the contest..congrats, Nette.
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Date: 1/13/2019 9:14:00 AM
Lovely write Nette..Congrats on your win..
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Date: 1/13/2019 7:27:00 AM
WoW! Nette, This so good. I found to so poetic and romantic! Your indeed a word player hands down! I am not surprised that you in standing in the top spot. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was most definitely well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/13/2019 7:14:00 AM
The way you put words together from your excellent vocabulary is amazing and highlighted in this poem... Great take on the contest, this poem is full of vivid imagery.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 1/11/2019 11:45:00 PM
Reminds me of ancient times riding through the forest on horse back!! Very nice!
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Date: 1/11/2019 5:18:00 PM
Hi Nette, this is an enchanting and beautiful poetic gem from your pen. You bring alive the scenes your wonderful words do paint in the mind. This vibrant piece is alive with magic. Your word paintings are divine. Line after line, I lose myself in this excellence. This reads as a winner Nette. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 1/11/2019 3:14:00 PM
Your poetry always enchants and inspires Nette. I love your ending and these lines most: That fireflies reel as if waking this space Pursuing lost hope , its desired embrace: Magical! : ) xxoo
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Date: 1/11/2019 9:24:00 AM
Enjoyed this poem Nette, awesome! You have a wonderful gift of describing a scene so perfectly, down to the slightest detail! Well done I'm almost certain its a win! Poetry wishes, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/10/2019 11:52:00 PM
Nice atmosphere, well done.
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Date: 1/10/2019 10:26:00 PM
I am ever enchanted by the magic of your artistry that sweeps me up and away to new heights, Nette. The emotional imagery of your poetry leaves me breathless. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/10/2019 8:21:00 PM
Love the imagery, and painting of your words, Nette, nice poem. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/10/2019 7:31:00 PM
Its all sounds so magical, into the woods you find true beauty and each other. Lovely entry Nette. gl
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Date: 1/10/2019 1:31:00 PM
Exceptional! I love happy endings set in wood's landscape.
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Date: 1/10/2019 11:50:00 AM
A very artfully painted image, Nette, nicely written piece.
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Date: 1/10/2019 9:14:00 AM
Beautifully written Nette. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 1/10/2019 7:50:00 AM
Wow , another gem from your pen Nette, A winner I see. Tom
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Date: 1/10/2019 7:36:00 AM
Beautiful brushstrokes, as always..a charming story you wrote, Nette. I enjoyed the read. My very best for a win at the TOP.
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