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Into the Woods

The ancient woods came alive in his dreams dark visions of forests and spirits were seen incessant drums beat into his heart escape the reservation and make a new start. Hotly his Cherokee blood burned within with an urgent tribal beat to begin a discovery to recover the distant past and go into the ancestral woods at last. For his people had roamed and knew the land had skillfully traded hides with the white man presided over the prairies and plains and in the mountainous regions had reigned. With ceremony and dignity he prepared to live life in the woods where he would share skills of nature and being one with the land to breathe and find freedom from society’s demands. Written on 1/9/2019

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Date: 2/3/2019 8:41:00 PM
Hello Laura he wanted to live in the woods, because he felt at home being in the outdoors. A beautiful poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 2/3/2019 4:51:00 PM
Great! Thoroughly enjoyed reading.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/3/2019 6:28:00 PM
Thanks, Valerie! :)
Date: 1/19/2019 11:12:00 AM
Laura, a great descriptive and well written poem that arouses strong emotions. Congratulations on your win!:). Hugs Eve ~`*
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/19/2019 11:14:00 AM
Thanks so much, Eve! I’m happy you liked this! ;)
Date: 1/19/2019 6:36:00 AM
Really love your poem Laura and congrats. on your win. More and more people are either going green or moving to remote areas, where they become self sufficient and "to breathe and find the freedom from society's demands" as your poem says. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/19/2019 11:09:00 AM
Thank you, Jennifer. I’m so glad you liked this! :)
Date: 1/18/2019 10:09:00 PM
That is amazing, Congratulations on your win you totally deserved it excellent!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/19/2019 11:08:00 AM
Thank you, Bobby! :)
Date: 1/17/2019 7:51:00 PM
Wonderful poetry, Laura. About the hardships of the American Indian. Belated congratulations on your 1st place win...Charlie
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/17/2019 9:31:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie! :)
Date: 1/15/2019 6:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win, Laura.. You penned this work of art so beautifully.. An exquisite rhyme.. Really enjoyed!! Many blessings to you..
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/15/2019 7:45:00 PM
Thanks so much, Robertina! I’m glad you enjoyed my poem! :)
Date: 1/14/2019 5:20:00 PM
I love where you took the theme, Laura, and how beautifully your poem flows. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/14/2019 5:32:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra! I’m so happy you liked this one! :)
Date: 1/13/2019 7:41:00 AM
Hi Laura, You've penned a good entry for the contest theme. Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest:-) Alexis
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/13/2019 9:07:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis! :)
Date: 1/13/2019 7:20:00 AM
What a take on the theme, a sad reality of what native Indian faced... Accompanied with great rhyme and flow.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/13/2019 9:06:00 AM
Thank you so much for my placement in your contest, Silent. I am thrilled!
Date: 1/10/2019 7:51:00 AM
A unique theme..so well written! I enjoyed the flow and rhythm..and also the look back in tribute to the natives. Best for a win at the TOP Laura.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/10/2019 3:40:00 PM
Thank you so much,Vijay! :)
Date: 1/10/2019 7:12:00 AM
A vision of his Native ancestry calling him to return...Beautiful write Laura..
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/10/2019 3:40:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph! :)
Date: 1/10/2019 2:22:00 AM
Enjoyed your verse Laura, well written, find freedom from society's demands, love that line. It seems we've turned our backs on nature, blinded by all tech gadgets and the not so important things in life. Tom.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/10/2019 3:38:00 PM
Thank you, Tom! I’m so glad you liked this one! :)
Date: 1/10/2019 1:09:00 AM
You honor our Native Americans who have always been one with the land and nature, giving back as they take. Just beautiful Laura! This gem is going into my faves! I hope to see it at the top of the winner's list my friend! Have a blessed new year! : ) xxoo
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/10/2019 3:38:00 PM
Thanks so much, Connie, for your kind comments and encouraging words! You are too kind! :)

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