Into the Woods

The ancient woods came alive in his dreams 
dark visions of forests and spirits were seen
incessant drums beat into his heart 
escape the reservation and make a new start. 

Hotly his Cherokee blood burned within
with an urgent tribal beat to begin 
a discovery to recover the distant past
and go into the ancestral woods at last. 

For his people had roamed and knew the land
had skillfully traded hides with the white man
presided over the prairies and plains
and in the mountainous regions had reigned. 

With ceremony and dignity he prepared 
to live life in the woods where he would share
skills of nature and being one with the land
to breathe and find freedom from society’s demands. 



Written on 1/9/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 8:41 PM
Hello Laura he wanted to live in the woods, because he felt at home being in the outdoors. A beautiful poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
Staton Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 4:51 PM
Great! Thoroughly enjoyed reading.
Leiser Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 6:28 PM
Thanks, Valerie! :)
Roper Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 11:12 AM
Laura, a great descriptive and well written poem that arouses strong emotions. Congratulations on your win!:). Hugs Eve ~`*
Leiser Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 11:14 AM
Thanks so much, Eve! I’m happy you liked this! ;)
Proxenos Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 6:36 AM
Really love your poem Laura and congrats. on your win. More and more people are either going green or moving to remote areas, where they become self sufficient and "to breathe and find the freedom from society's demands" as your poem says. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Leiser Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 11:09 AM
Thank you, Jennifer. I’m so glad you liked this! :)
May Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 10:09 PM
That is amazing, Congratulations on your win you totally deserved it excellent!
Leiser Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 11:08 AM
Thank you, Bobby! :)
Messina Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 7:51 PM
Wonderful poetry, Laura. About the hardships of the American Indian. Belated congratulations on your 1st place win...Charlie
Leiser Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 9:31 PM
Thanks, Charlie! :)
B. Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 6:34 PM
Congratulations on your first place win, Laura.. You penned this work of art so beautifully.. An exquisite rhyme.. Really enjoyed!! Many blessings to you..
Leiser Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 7:45 PM
Thanks so much, Robertina! I’m glad you enjoyed my poem! :)
Haight Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 5:20 PM
I love where you took the theme, Laura, and how beautifully your poem flows. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
Leiser Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 5:32 PM
Thank you, Sandra! I’m so happy you liked this one! :)
Y. Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 7:41 AM
Hi Laura, You've penned a good entry for the contest theme. Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest:-) Alexis
Leiser Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 9:07 AM
Thank you, Alexis! :)
One Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 7:20 AM
What a take on the theme, a sad reality of what native Indian faced... Accompanied with great rhyme and flow.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Leiser Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 9:06 AM
Thank you so much for my placement in your contest, Silent. I am thrilled!
Pandit Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 7:51 AM
A unique theme..so well written! I enjoyed the flow and rhythm..and also the look back in tribute to the natives. Best for a win at the TOP Laura.
Leiser Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 3:40 PM
Thank you so much,Vijay! :)
May Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 7:12 AM
A vision of his Native ancestry calling him to return...Beautiful write Laura..
Leiser Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 3:40 PM
Thank you, Joseph! :)
Cunningham Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 2:22 AM
Enjoyed your verse Laura, well written, find freedom from society's demands, love that line. It seems we've turned our backs on nature, blinded by all tech gadgets and the not so important things in life. Tom.
Leiser Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 3:38 PM
Thank you, Tom! I’m so glad you liked this one! :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 1:09 AM
You honor our Native Americans who have always been one with the land and nature, giving back as they take. Just beautiful Laura! This gem is going into my faves! I hope to see it at the top of the winner's list my friend! Have a blessed new year! : ) xxoo
Leiser Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 3:38 PM
Thanks so much, Connie, for your kind comments and encouraging words! You are too kind! :)
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