Into Silence

*** INTO SILENCE ***

Like a child
Again
I have been dismissed
To Silence:

Where I find
   fawns walk
   splendidly soundless;
Where the moon
   only
Brings a rising
   Voice
To converse with 
   my heart…


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(c) sally young eslinger 3/26/22
Thanks be to God
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Ligon Avatar
April 13, 2022 at 4:06 PM
Sounds like a humbling experience. Sometimes it's there we find awe. This can be interpreted many ways to different people.
Eslinger Avatar
April 14, 2022 at 5:09 AM
Thank you,Juliet, for your sensitive comment and interpretation. So nice to meet you!
Seeker Avatar
April 11, 2022 at 7:30 AM
Soulful stirrings of silence suffusing our spacial heart ~ beautiful write, Sally! Enjoyed
Eslinger Avatar
April 14, 2022 at 5:13 AM
Thank you, Seeker, for your touching, knowing comment. Have a blessed day!
Faulkner Avatar
April 9, 2022 at 11:34 AM
The silence and beauty of nature is so compelling, like the image of the fawn and rising moon, I too am reduced to speechlessness~
Eslinger Avatar
April 14, 2022 at 5:18 AM
A most thoughtful comment. So true. I thank you for your reading and comment. Hugs, dear friend.
Edmonds  Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 4:57 PM
Beautiful Sally, love the notion of nature’s sound of silence conversing with your heart… Belle
Eslinger Avatar
April 14, 2022 at 5:27 AM
Hi, Belle! Since last autumn, I have been concentrating on nature A LOT, greatly as being bedridden I don’t get out enough to take it for granted. :-) When we drive out going to dr.s, the trees seem SO SO various & beautiful. I Ooo & Anna’s they try to speak to me. Thank U for ur dear words.
DiMino Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 1:33 PM
Great writing, Sally! You are a writer's well of companionship, and inspiration. Beautiful work! A fav.!
Eslinger Avatar
April 14, 2022 at 5:33 AM
My dear Joe, your words humble me…I keep trying, not sure I’ll ever be able to transcribe the ineffable…. Thank you for your touching comment. xoxo sally
Maverick Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 12:17 PM
Very peaceful Sally, a hearts understanding .'
Eslinger Avatar
April 14, 2022 at 5:38 AM
Thank you, Joe. As age advances the physical, it makes life harder physically, but there has been a benefit for me of deeper spiritual perception and growth,,,fodder for poetry’s voice. Blessings gu you!
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