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Into Night

wistfully day fades. . . splendor on the rocky coast turning into night For Raul Moreno's "Vanilla Sky" contest

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Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 12:14:00 PM

awesome

De R

Date: 5/7/2011 8:26:00 AM

I suddenly had to urge to read some old poems of yours, not really sure why..but, anyway, you caught my eye with this haiku. A great image brought up by this one, dear...I would want to read more of you, cause I really like your style(especially your sonnets), but can't find the time, hope I will someday...Have a great weekend! Hugs, Emilia

Kash Poet

Date: 2/3/2011 11:08:00 AM

beautiful images of transformation of day to night!--kashinath

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/30/2010 3:29:00 AM

I just love the images you have in this one Andrea, love Wilma

Buffy Fooksss Aka Lynette C.

Date: 5/26/2010 10:48:00 PM

THANKS. I POSTED, ITS A LIL MEAN THO' BUT NO MORE THEN A JOKEE!! AS ALWAYSSS I DO bUfFy

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/5/2010 7:18:00 AM

Great Haiku, Andrea! And congrats on your win!..Thank you for your comments and have a great time...Love, Gert

Travis Tapley

Date: 4/29/2010 9:52:00 PM

Absolutely fabulous and beautiful too! The image in my head is so vanilla right now! The beauty of the day fading into a vanilla sky!!! This was great!!! A favorite.

James Fraser

Date: 4/27/2010 3:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest >> James

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/27/2010 9:02:00 AM

Congrats on your win in the contest, Andrea!! Very nice Haiku...hugs, Jimmy

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/26/2010 11:54:00 AM

congrats on your win in this contest well done faleshia

Mitch White

Date: 4/25/2010 8:37:00 PM

Splenderfull Haiku Congrats Andrea- I finally thought of something to write as you can see lol

Buffy Fooksss Aka Lynette C.

Date: 4/25/2010 8:24:00 PM

I LIKE THE NITE.IM LIKIN' THE POEM.OH NO NO IM NO FAN OF MILY CYRUS.A BAD GRL LIK ME HAS NO LIKE IN THE PREPPY-NES OF THAT GIRL.WE NAMED OUR NEWBORN MILEY BECUASE HER SMILE IS KEWT. .bUfFy.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/25/2010 7:36:00 PM

congrats Andrea on your wonderful win in Raul's contest.. enjoy this special placement ..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Charles Henderson

Date: 4/25/2010 7:13:00 PM

A very good win Andrea. Well deserved. Charles

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/25/2010 5:37:00 PM

Wahoo!!! for you Andrea!! I loved this one!! I knew it would do well...congrats!!!

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/25/2010 4:25:00 PM

Andrea, congrats on placing 3rd in my contest...Raul

Brian Strand

Date: 4/25/2010 9:17:00 AM

Sunset ,I've noticed does indeed have that feeling Andrea.Rgds Brian

Skat A

Date: 4/25/2010 9:00:00 AM

The best of luck with this entry always a pleasure adding a Good morning to you . Have your self a wonderful Sunday. IRMA

Daver Austin

Date: 4/25/2010 5:23:00 AM

What coast you be talkin' 'bout - The Great Salt Lake? Seriously. I like your mood setter, "Wistfully."

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/24/2010 8:57:00 PM

soup mail back to you! :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2010 8:03:00 PM

good luck in the contest, using your imagination in a delightful way, nice read you have here,..p.d

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/24/2010 7:48:00 PM

I have alot of respect for Rosa Parks and the teens that had the courage to buck the system and took the abuse dished out by the police. I am glad that I did not have to put up with alot of racial issues growing up. Thanks to Lincoln, MLK etc but I disagree with MLK putting those teens in harms way for his American dream. From what I have read that is the way it looks. His arrest was used as a political pawn it appears. Does the end justify the means? we all have to judge for ourselves.

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/24/2010 6:12:00 PM

This is wistfully filled with loveliness, Andrea!! Makes me say "ahhhhhhhhhh"....

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 4/24/2010 5:48:00 PM

Andrea~ A very nice entry for the contest I hope you do well. thank you for your on going support! Love Laura :)