Into Love's Heart

His hands, soft as rain. His body's sensuous terrain. His heart, my domain. 3/20/2021 ~1~ Rhymed Senryu

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 3/20/2021 10:21:00 PM

Panagiota, Those lines that rhymed, my how fine. As I look at my own hands that are rough. Still, you found a crease that I thought I hid so well. -Richard

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/21/2021 7:49:00 AM

Hello Richard~ so glad you found the crease that was hidden. I wish I could have brought forth more passion in this Poem...I Really think it says so much. His heart~ my domain, for example! That's so powerful... Sigh! At least....to me. Hugs, Pangie xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2021 3:43:00 PM

ooh la la. I like it like THIS.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/21/2021 7:41:00 AM

I do too, Andrea!! It deserves far more reads. But.,what's a Poet to do? Might change the title..? Your liking it means so much. Thank you, Pangie xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/20/2021 12:05:00 PM

Oozing with romance, your trademark. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/21/2021 7:35:00 AM

I guess so. But I don't write only that as you know. Look at my poetry since day 1""I write about murder, death,education, marriage and Tributes to Poets. I don't want to be branded in any category. Oh, I forget political Poetry Thank you.....Pangie. And the Birthday Card and Blog for March 13th were great, Tom. Thank you...PANGIE.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/20/2021 8:12:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, a very romantic poem. Hugs Darlene xx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/20/2021 9:35:00 AM

Happy Saturday, Darlene YES it is romantic.))) Nice of you to visit! Hugs, Pangie XXOO