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Into Her Mystical Sea

Beyond the waves her voice an enchanting lyric Stars sparkle in my eyes, Of desire Her reflection a shimmer of loves radiance The drape of a waves crest Ebbs from her shoulders Forming an inlet where my soul is lost As she descends the staircase, She is like moonlight Her bare skin sweet as honeyed caramel And I, Swallowed into her mystical sea written: 10-12-2019 NUDE - descending a staircase Poetry Contest

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John Hamilton

Date: 10/23/2019 2:56:00 PM

This was soooo good Jeanne, loved the metaphor of the sea and stars, the whole thing, well done and congrats on a fine placement in this very difficult premium contest!

John Gondolf

Date: 10/23/2019 7:29:00 AM

Beautifully written, Jeanne, congrats on your win. John

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/23/2019 6:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win dear girl,

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 10/23/2019 4:24:00 AM

A charming moonlight descending. Congrats, Jeanne.

John Lawless

Date: 10/22/2019 7:17:00 PM

the broken offset lines add the rhythm of surf sets approaching the beach added to the intense images beguiling the lovers. Thanks for entering the contest

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/13/2019 7:35:00 AM

Your lovely self is in this write...well done...

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/14/2019 7:31:00 AM

A humble thank you!

Joseph May

Date: 10/13/2019 7:33:00 AM

Wonderful write Jeanne, best wishes in the contest..

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/14/2019 7:30:00 AM

This was one of those writing prompts that at first left me no urge to write about...but then i wondered how I could do it in a delicate way. Thank you for your kindness to read.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/13/2019 6:01:00 AM

Dear Jeanne, I can see the beauty in your eyes and in your soul. Winning wishes are being sent your way, Have a great day.

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/14/2019 7:28:00 AM

Good morning...and thank you for your wishes. All the best to you.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/13/2019 5:43:00 AM

This is so nice! Very smoothly written. Beautiful :)

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/14/2019 7:32:00 AM

Thank You Heidi...a pleasure to have you stop by for a read.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/12/2019 10:36:00 PM

I really like how you've expressed desire so delicately, without unnecessary and unbecoming graphic verse/images. Bravo, Jeanne! Here's to a winner for you in the contest. Warm wishes, Gershon