Jeanne Mcgee Poet Free verse

Into Her Mystical Sea

Beyond the waves her voice an enchanting lyric
                                       
                               Stars sparkle in my eyes,               Of desire
          
                                          Her reflection a shimmer of loves radiance
                                        
               The drape of a waves crest         Ebbs from her shoulders
                              
                                  Forming an inlet where my soul is lost

      As she descends the staircase,                 She is like moonlight
                     
                         Her bare skin sweet as honeyed caramel

                 And I,                     Swallowed into her mystical sea


written:  10-12-2019
NUDE - descending a staircase Poetry Contest

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John Hamilton October 23, 2019 at 2:56 PM This was soooo good Jeanne, loved the metaphor of the sea and stars, the whole thing, well done and congrats on a fine placement in this very difficult premium contest!

John Gondolf October 23, 2019 at 7:29 AM Beautifully written, Jeanne, congrats on your win. John

Mystic Rose Rose October 23, 2019 at 6:18 AM Congratulations on your win dear girl,

Kurt Ravidas October 23, 2019 at 4:24 AM A charming moonlight descending. Congrats, Jeanne.

John Lawless October 22, 2019 at 7:17 PM the broken offset lines add the rhythm of surf sets approaching the beach added to the intense images beguiling the lovers. Thanks for entering the contest

Arturo Michael October 13, 2019 at 7:35 AM Your lovely self is in this write...well done... Jeanne Mcgee October 14, 2019 at 7:31 AM A humble thank you!

Joseph May October 13, 2019 at 7:33 AM Wonderful write Jeanne, best wishes in the contest.. Jeanne Mcgee October 14, 2019 at 7:30 AM This was one of those writing prompts that at first left me no urge to write about...but then i wondered how I could do it in a delicate way. Thank you for your kindness to read.

Mystic Rose Rose October 13, 2019 at 6:01 AM Dear Jeanne, I can see the beauty in your eyes and in your soul. Winning wishes are being sent your way, Have a great day. Jeanne Mcgee October 14, 2019 at 7:28 AM Good morning...and thank you for your wishes. All the best to you.

Heidi Sands October 13, 2019 at 5:43 AM This is so nice! Very smoothly written. Beautiful :) Jeanne Mcgee October 14, 2019 at 7:32 AM Thank You Heidi...a pleasure to have you stop by for a read.

Gershon Wolf October 12, 2019 at 10:36 PM I really like how you've expressed desire so delicately, without unnecessary and unbecoming graphic verse/images. Bravo, Jeanne! Here's to a winner for you in the contest. Warm wishes, Gershon

Regina Mcintosh October 12, 2019 at 10:02 PM A beautifully written poem. God bless you with many more, Gina Jeanne Mcgee October 12, 2019 at 10:11 PM Oh, I sure hope so too Gina.

Sunlite Wanter October 12, 2019 at 6:25 PM Beantiful writing. I often "(form) an inlet where my soul is lost," in my imagination when I want to mediate. Jeanne Mcgee October 12, 2019 at 10:10 PM that sounds so lovely. thanks for stopping by for a read.

Sandra Adams October 12, 2019 at 6:14 PM Great metaphor and beautifully penned Jeanne.... love this part "the drape of waves crest" lovely...:) hugs Jeanne Mcgee October 12, 2019 at 10:10 PM My favorite part too. xoxo