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Intimate Reveries

He calls me naïve and I reply with a smile, but in my dreams he whispers words of love; my cravings fed: fully sated. He says I'm a foolish child; innocent and sweet, but if he knew about our midnight trysts, I wonder if he would find me guilty, or acquit me for such intimate reveries. If my fantasies are a sin; should I be ashamed of my crime? I dare not sleep, perchance to dream.* 2/9/21 Fragmented Verse Poetry Sponsored by Emile Pinet *Phrase spoken by Shakespeare's Hamlet

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Date: 3/4/2021 12:07:00 PM
Great fanciful fantasies Jenna. Love the nod to Willie :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 3/4/2021 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations Jenna! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a difficult contest to judge but your wonderful poem successfully caught my attention, well done my friend, Emile.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/4/2021 8:52:00 AM
Emile, I’m honored to have this poem on your list. Thank you
Date: 2/13/2021 11:19:00 AM
Never be ashamed of your crimes. lol Beautiful poem Jenna!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/14/2021 2:09:00 AM
Some can be totally off the wall, and some very intimate. Thanks, Mark.
Date: 2/9/2021 9:58:00 AM
Fantasy dreams are allowed for no one can see the midnight trysts or the reverie. A lovely write Jenna, dare to sleep~ Belle
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/14/2021 2:08:00 AM
I'll keep that in mind. Thanks so much, Belle.
Date: 2/9/2021 7:34:00 AM
If fantasies are sinful then we're all sinners, there is no shame in it. Wish my dreams were like that instead of being chased by an axeman lol. Good luck Jenna. Tom
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/9/2021 10:50:00 AM
Lol, sending him Victors way.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/9/2021 8:10:00 AM
An axe man! We need to get your axeman to chase away Victor’s nightmares. Thanks so much, Tom.
Date: 2/9/2021 5:41:00 AM
What a dream I cannot dream like this so I have nightmares :) ~~
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/9/2021 8:06:00 AM
I am sorry to hear that your nights are filled with nightmares. Thank you for reading me, Victor.
Date: 2/9/2021 5:31:00 AM
I long to sleep, hoping to dream. A beautifully written verse, Jenna, good luck in the contest. Hugs.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/9/2021 8:04:00 AM
Hello, John, and I’m So pleased with your thoughts. Thank you ;)
Date: 2/9/2021 4:56:00 AM
WOW. This is a fave. I love it. It should win for sure. I just love it. WOW and Double WOW. You have inspired and enlightened and delighted... I'm breathing in hues of fantasy rich and alive... vibrating light... love this so . God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/9/2021 8:02:00 AM
Thank you very much, Gina. Your generous comments are reward enough.

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