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light falls from heaven erasing pain and failure piercing the shadows Falling through the silent trees Laughing like the moon will please I didn't realize In the blue skies There is joy in the whispering breeze Shimmering glitter - breath of stardust Charlie Hai-Lim-Ku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Charles Messina January 21, 2022

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Charles Messina

Date: 3/16/2022 7:38:00 PM

Hi Gina, sorry it took so long to comment on this lovely write. you did well on combining these forms. My belated Congrats on your win in my contest. Love, Charlie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/13/2022 4:27:00 AM

I have read your winning work and was delighted that it is on the winners' list. Way to go. Congrats. Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/11/2022 12:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. Love it. Have a blessed day/weekend.........

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/11/2022 5:01:00 AM

"There is joys in the whispering breeze" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!