Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

Intimacy

the trust
the comfort
blurred line
between
the you
the me

the invitation
unspoken 
implied
a nudge
a smile
a touch
acknowledged
proximity
the attraction
the closeness
mutual devotion
intimate
inseparable
a harmony uncommon            



AP: Honorable Mention 2020, Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on February 3, 2020 for contest STRAND SELECT C sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 2ND

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Caren Krutsinger February 5, 2020 at 4:45 PM Your poem brings a hearty human-ness to intimacy, Line, which is what it is all about.

M. L. Kiser February 5, 2020 at 12:34 PM Wow, beautifully done; good luck in the contest.

Cecilia Macfarlane February 5, 2020 at 11:04 AM You captured the essence of intimacy beautifully. Love it! Hugs

Alkas Poetry February 4, 2020 at 7:50 AM tHIS IS LOVE, SURELY IS ! BRAVO ! SALUTE ALKAS Line Gauthier February 4, 2020 at 3:30 PM Thank you so much, Alkas. Most appreciated.

Julie Achilles February 4, 2020 at 4:15 AM Intimate, touching, lovely, well done Line, regards, Julie Line Gauthier February 4, 2020 at 3:30 PM Thank you so much, Julie. Most appreciated.

Krish Radhakrishna February 3, 2020 at 11:51 PM This is cleverly written Line. I can visualise a series of photographs of two people who are very intimate! You can see the camera rolling till the last frame! Line Gauthier February 4, 2020 at 3:30 PM Thank you so much, Krish. Most appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire February 3, 2020 at 11:18 PM it is easy to love this poem Line Gauthier February 4, 2020 at 3:30 PM Thank you so much, Timothy. Most appreciated.

Quoth Theraven February 3, 2020 at 10:08 PM Line, Your poem lines are effective and touching. The very essence of what it is to be human. When friends exchange tickets for an upgrade to the sublime. -Richard Line Gauthier February 3, 2020 at 10:25 PM Thank you so much, Richard. Most appreciated.

Eve Roper February 3, 2020 at 9:23 PM yes, a harmony. Line Gauthier February 3, 2020 at 10:24 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Eve.

Kim Rodrigues February 3, 2020 at 8:47 PM Love it! Yes it belongs only to the couple. Line Gauthier February 3, 2020 at 10:24 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Kim.